AsYa SS: Change My Mind CH. 1 UPDATED PAGE 6

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Change My Mind

I'm back. Again. You must all want to kill me. I know 🤣

For two reasons.

1) I cant actually write to save mah life;

2) Its more angst.

But it'll get bettah loves!!!

This is a Short Story, which should be finished in about 5 parts maybe? I'm not sure 🤣

Oh, and the titles a song by one direction. (yes, again 🤣)

So here yah go, mah first Short Story!!!

Ps, its really short too. 'bout 100 words maybe?

Dunno 🤣

You'll only waste 2 minutes of your life. And about 1 gazillion brain cells 🤣

oh, and it might be triggering too.

-Prologue-

"No Asad! Stop!"

"Why Ammi? I'm useless anyway."

***

"Bhaijaan, have something, you haven't eaten in days,"

"Najma, I'm pathetic. I don't need food to be wasted on me."

***

"Asad I've had enough. You are going to start behaving normally from this instant before I end up doing what neither of us want."

"I don't want anything."

Except her.

***

"Zoya, he's not behaving normal, he's not talking, not eating, I don't know what's wrong with him!"

"So?"

"What's wrong with you? This is Asad I'm talking about."

"Why would I care?"

Except she did.

***

"You love her."

"No."

"Then why do you still have her earing, her Ammis akhri nishaani?

"She didn't ask for it back"

"She did."

"Shut up"

A story where Asad's suicidal, Zoya's doesn't care (but she does), and Ayaan is rightfully named the Love Guru.

Stupid I know.

But PLEEJ comment, even if it is to tell that I should seriously stop writing and stick to being retard. 🤣

Love you all <3

Ps.

Comment.

:)


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Oishi23 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Great prolouge..would love to read more <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Asad's suicidal? Oh man I'm freaked. :$
But but but, this is awesome! :D yayyy! You have to.continue this soon. Zoya seems like a bitch. :| I hope not. :(
Love ya! xx
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Posted: 12 years ago
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You caught my attention dearie...waiting for the first part..😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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😆 hehe!
i'm not gonna ask u to stop writing cuz i want the next part ASAP! 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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don't you dare stop writing,😲

i want the next part sooon 😃😉😆
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NEXT PART NEXT PART NEXT PART NEXT PART NEXT PART NEXT PART NEXT PART NEXT PART NEXT PART NEXT PART NEXT PART NEXT PART NEXT PART NEXT PART NEXT PART NEXT PART NEXT PART NEXT PART NEXT PART NEXT PART NEXT PART NEXT PART NEXT PART NEXT PART NEXT PART NEXT PART NEXT PART NEXT PART NEXT PART NEXT PART NEXT PART NEXT PART NEXT PART NEXT PART NEXT PART NEXT PART NEXT PART NEXT PART NEXT PART NEXT PART NEXT PART NEXT PART NEXT PART NEXT PART NEXT PART NEXT PART NEXT PART NEXT PART NEXT PART NEXT PART NEXT PART NEXT PART NEXT PART NEXT PART NEXT PART NEXT PART NEXT PART NEXT PART NEXT PART NEXT PART NEXT PART NEXT PART NEXT PART NEXT PART NEXT PART NEXT PART NEXT PART NEXT PART NEXT PART NEXT PART NEXT PART NEXT PART

AND A BIT LONGER 😆
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Don't you dare to stop writing this!! I mean it😳 You have to continue this. Asad/KSG ki kasam hai aapko😳 Todne ki koshish mat karna warna mujhse bura koi nahi hoga. You get that!












Lol meri dhamki bhi funny lagti hai🤣

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Great prologue love<3 :) eager for the next part! :):)
Continue super soon! :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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That was beautiful dear! 👏

Please continue soon! 👍🏼

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