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zabardast yar!!!! hope esa hy ho.. beautifully written :)

Part 14

Everything works out fine, Ram Priya get their business and KM home back and they shift over there with Dadi, Ma, Rishabh and everyone...Everything is going as usual...

One fine Sunday, Pihu's school vacation has started so most of the time she spends time at Sharma House...Dadi and Ma are leaving for a month long spiritual tour...

Priya has got up early today as she has to ensure everything is ready for Ma and Dadi's tour...Ram has also got up early (than usual) ...it's a ritual for him to go with Vikram for a walk on Sunday morning...

Priya: arre aap uth gayen...

Ram : (rubbing his eyes...)haan...

Ram gets up, dresses in T-shirt, Track pant and sports shoes...

Vikram calls up...

Ram: Haan mein tayaar huon..milte hain...

Priya: Mr.Kapoor yaad hain na ki aapko ki Ma aur Dadi aaj tour par jaane wale hain...

Ram: Haan bhai...mujhe sab yaad hain...walk se jaldi aa jaoonga...ab jaoon???

Priya: haan...

Ram reaches till door...

Priya: Suniye ..Mr.Kapoor yaad hain na??

Ram: turning back...Haan baba...kitni bar yaad dilaogi...

Now Priya...wants to irritate Ram...

Ram reaches the last step of the stairs...

Priya is looking from top...

Priya: Mr.Kapoor...

Ram: turns back...and asks through hand actions... kya hain??

Priya: Jaldi aayee...yaad hain na??

Ram (shows a masti wala slapping action)...

Priya catching her ears says sorry...

Ram throws a flying kiss...

Priya acts as if catching it...

Ram starts walking towards KM door...

Priya from top ...again...

Priya: Mr. Kapoor...suniye...

Ram doesn't respond...

Priya: aare suniye toh...

Ram without turning back waves his hand and goes...

Priya goes downstairs...to Ma's room...

Seeing Ma and Dadi already ready...

Priya: Arre Ma...aap log uth gaye? And takes their blessings...

Ma: Haan Priya...hum dono ekdum excited hain aajke tour ke liye...kash humsab saath mein ja sakte...

Dadi: Haan Priya puttar...Rishabh..Soumya..toh saath mein hain...agar tu, Golu puttar aur Pihu bhi hote toh bada maza aata...

Priya: haan Dadi...par kya kare...Mr.Kapoor ke liye ye naya project bahot important hain...koi baat nahi kisi aur waqt sab saath mein jayenge na...

Priya: Aap dono ki packing toh ho gaye na? Garam kapde ...dawayeeya...

Ma: Haan bhai hum toh tayar hain...

Priya: Ma ...mein nashte ka dekh leti huonn...aur aapko travel ke liye bhi kuch banakar deti huon...

Ma: Haan Priya...tum nashte ka dekh lo...mein aur beeji...bhi fresh ho jate hain...

Priya comes ut of room and Rishabh and Soumya meet her...

Priya: So everything ready for the travel???

Rishabh: Haan Bhabhi...bus agar aap teeno bhi chaltein to maza aa jata...

Priya: Rishabh...kisi aur din challenge na...ab mu mat latkaoon...chalo tum log bhi fresh ho jao...mein breakfast ready kar deti hoon...

Soumya: Bhabhi mein bhi aapko madat kar deti hoon...

Priya: Soumya...nahi tum ek kaam karo...Pihu ko jaga kar ready kar do...

Soumya: Achcha Bhabhi...

After sometime...everyone have their breakfast and are back to their packing stuff...

Pihu: Mumma sab log bag kya kahin ja rahe hain??

Priya: (taking Pihu in her lap) ...haan Baby Dadi, Badi Dadi, Rishabh Chachu and Soumya Chachi are going out for some days...

Pihu: Toh aap mein aur Papa kyu nahi ja rahein...mujhe bhi jana hain inke saath...

Priya: Bachche Papa ka kuch important kaam hain office mein...toh unhein chutti nahi milegi...toh Mumma aur Pihu bhi Papa ko support karne ke liye ruk rahien hain...

Pihu: Nahin..mujhe bhi inke saath jana hain...Papa ko toh hamesha kaam hota hain...and she starts crying

Priya: Nahi..Baby...aise rote nahin...ok Mumma Papa se keh dengi ki aapko aaj Nanu ke ghar drop karein..is it ok???

Pihu: rubbing her eyes...haan ...

Priya: Mera Good bachcha...and kisses her...

Rishabh takes Pihu from there to show her some new game...

Priya: Ma ...yeh mahine bhar Pihu...ko samjhana bahot mushkil hoga mere liye...

Ma: Haan beta...Ram toh office mein hoga...yahan par bus Pihu aur tu...phir se soch na...kya hum Pihu ko le jaye aapne saath...

Priya: Nahi Ma...wo mujhse door itne waqt ke liye nahi rahi hain...aapko tang karegi...

Soumya: Bhabhi mujhe toh lag raha hain ...Pihu se zyada toh ...aapko Pihu ki aadat hain...

Priya: haan...

Rishabh and Pihu are coming from outside KM...

Priya: Arre Rishabh tere Bhaiya dikhe bahar se aatein hua?

Rishabh: Nahi Bhabhi ...bahar toh nahi they...

Priya: Achcha theek hain...

Thinking ..yeh Mr.Kapoor ko itni bar yaad dilaya tha...ki aaj jaldi aa jaye...

Part 15

It's 2 pm now...Ram has not yet returned...Priya and everyone were trying to contact Ram and Vikram but none of them are picking up their phone...It's getting late for Ma, Dadi and everyone...they have to leave by 4pm and everyone is eagerly waiting for Ram...

Sudhir,Shipra, Nuts everyone come for meeting Ma, Dadi and everyone for whishing Happy Journey...They take Pihu with them to Sharma House...

Priya is very angry with Ram...even after her repeated telling he has not yet reached...Aane do Mr.Kapoor ko achi class leti hoon...

Everyone is seating in KM hall and waiting for Ram...Finally Ram arrives with Vikram at 3 pm...Vikram is supporting Ram...

Vikram: Ram sambhal ke...aaram se...

Ram is in pain...

Ram: aahhh...

There's a white fracture bandage...on Ram's left leg...

Seeing Ram like this...

Priya: Yeh kya hua Mr.Kapoor...

Vikram and Rishabh slowly make Ram sit on sofa...keeping his leg on the table...

Everyone starts bombarding Vikram and Ram with Questions...why they were not picking the phones...etc...

Priya gets water for Ram and Vikram...

Vikram explains: Humlog football khel rahein they...aur Ram ne zor se kick mari aur gir gaya...goal toh hua lekin Ram ka pair bhi fracture ho gaya...Ram ko hospital mein fracture lagane ke karan late ho gaye...

Rishabh: Ma tour cancel kar dete hain...Bhai ko aise chodke kaise jayenge...

Ma: Haan Rishabh...tour cancel kar dein...

Ram: insists mujhe kuch nahi hua hain...aaplog trip cancel mat kariya...Priya hain na yahan...

Priya: Haan Ma...mein huon na yaha...itne dino ke baad kuch plan kiya hain...aaplog aaram se jayiye...

After much insistence...everyone gets ready to continue with the tour...

Before leaving:

Ma: Ram achche bachche ki tarah Priya ki baat manna ...ekdum aaram karna aur jaldi se thik ho jana...koi bhi zid mat karna...Priya...agar ye teri baat nahin sunega...toh turant mujhe phone karna...Priya tum dono yahin...niche ke kamre main shift ho jao jab tak Ram ka pair thik nahi ho jata...

Priya: Haan Ma...

The car has come to pick up the travellers...and they leave for the tour...Priya and Vikram go out till the car and wish them Happy Journey

Priya: (sitting besides Ram, Vikram is standing) Mr.Kapoor meine kaha than a jaldi aayeye...

Ram makes baby face and looks down...

Priya: Achcha aap dono ke liye kuch khane ke liye laoon...

Vikram: Nahi Priya ...mein bhi chalta hoon...Neha bhi ekdum ghusse mein hogi...kabse call rahi hain...Bus mujhe batao Ram ko kis room mein le jana hain???

Priya: Mr.Kapoor Ma ke room mein chale...

Ram: nahi mujhe study mein le chalo...

Priya (without saying anything...as she knows it is paining very much for Ram)...

Both Vikram and Priya support Ram and make him sleep on the bed available in study room...

Ram closes his eyes

Vikram places Ram's leg in elevated position by putting 2 cushions below his leg...

Vikram: Ram ye thik hain? dukh toh hi raha hain na?

Ram waves his hand saying it's ok...

Vikram: (calling Priya and saying in very low tone) ye lo...yeh Ram ke medicines hain...kuch pain killers hain...abhi doctor ne 2 pain killer diye hain...uska aasar shayad 4-5 ghante tak rahega...uske baad Ram ko thoda dard hoga...but don't worry...agar kisi bhi cheez ki zaroorat ho toh urant mujhe ya Neha ko phone kar dena...Humlog evening mein aa jayenge...Bus tum uske pass abhi thodi der baithna usko bahot dard ho raha tha...hospital mein bhi...And Don't worry everything will be allright...

Vikram goes towards Ram and tells him Ram abhi nikal raha hoon...shyam ko aat ahoon...take care buddy and get well soon..

Priya is very worried...

Priya goes near Ram. Taking his hand in hers...

Ram: opens his eyes (his eyes are red and watery as it is paining him very much)

Priya: Mr.Kapoor kuch khayenge a juice lau?

Ram: Nahi...Bus tum mere pas behtho...bahot dard ho raha hain...

Priya: (caressing his hair) sab thik ho jayega...aap aaram kariye...kisses his forehead...and Ram goes to sleep...

Fracture and tears😭

Bahut pyarasa ff.I liked it very much.