SwaRon FF- KiSmAt CoNnEcTiOn NOTE (Pg145) CH-43 Pg 143 *Aug11, 14* - Page 6

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Posted: 11 years ago
#51
Nice start :-) OMG Sharon is married to Shivam :O
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Posted: 11 years ago
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In the beginning i was like  in dreamland & just ASSUME that Sharon & " Swayam" are getting married awww so sweet. BUT after knowing that Sharon's would be husband is that beep🤢 i was completely shocked & got a heart attack
This beep seem to be interested in her property 😡 & he is going to make Sharon's life hell for sure.
And where is Swayam bring him in this FF very soon
Update soon  
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Posted: 11 years ago
#53
Hey...Thanks fr the update...
The Penned down of this Update was too nnyc...
The update was very gud...but Sharon Shivam..Couple...
Huh..!
Wat will happen nxt...hope Swayam comes ssooonnn !

Waiting fr next...
Sammy.
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intresting.. update soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#55
Super update,
Shivam , hell person,
Waiting fr next,
Bring Swayam soon...
Ruby :)
PS- sry fr late cmmnts !
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#56
Awesome concept ... Sharon married to shivam 😲, interesting looking forward for next part .. Amazing chapter😊
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update soon re
waiting for ur update
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God.. Awsome concept n awsome chapter...!! Cant wait update soon n do pm me
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Hey friends'..The second Chapter of this FF..
I know in the previous Chap. There were too many Grammatical mistakes, Sorry for that'.
Hope you will like this Chapter'.
And one more time..Sorry..if you further find any mistake..


Note: Sharon and Shivam are in Mumbai, his parents are in Nagpur'.

Recap- He irritated'.grabbed the Blanket and slept off'.
 Sharon( in mind) Sorry Shivam'.but I can't help'.
She switched off the lights'..and tried to sleep''
She once again went to past day'.i.e. the day of their Engagement'.

Chapter 2

FLASHBACK
The Day Of Engagement
In RaiPrakash Mansion'.
Renuka- Ohho'ye kaise cushions hai'.jaldi badlo ise'.
Servant- Madam, par Sahab ji ( Gautam R.) ne yahi lane ko bola tha'
Renuka- Are baba'mein bol rahi hun na'
Servant- Thik hai Madam'
The Servant went off'.
Renuka *to herself* Uff..ye sab kuch kaam ke nahi hai'bola tha meine mein khud kar lungi..nahi' servant hi chahiye inhe..huh !!
Saying this she went to check'.Sharon..
Sharon in her room..was in a Purple Lehenga'. And was wearing the Earings'
Renuka entered'
Renuka- Sharon'.ready ho gayi'.( Sharon was facing her back )
Sharon- Bas Chaachi..do minute'
Then she turned around..
She was looking beautiful'
Sharon- Ab batao, kaisi lag rahi hun mein ??
Renuka- Bohot pyaari'.
She hugged her'.
Renuka- Acha..tum niche chalo , ladke wale aate hi honge'
Sharon- Umm'itne jaldi..?
Renuka- Itne jaldi ka kya matlab hai'.ab chalo bhi'.

In the Drawing Room:
"Hmm..bohot ache"'. Said Gautam RaiPrakash..to the workers'
Worker 1- Dhanyawad Sahab'.
Gautam- Ye lo'( he took out some money and gave to each one of them as reward )
All the workers were happy'Gautam was very kind'.
"Peep Peep"
Shivam's Family arrived'.
Welcoming session was too nice'
His family loved the RaiPrakashs'.

Sharon came down with her Chaachi'.
Shivam's Mom hugged Sharon'..
Engagement was successful'.
All were happy' after a week Wedding was going to be there'.

FLASHBACK ENDS

Sharon saw her ring'she was confused'she accepted this Marriage..
but she thought Shivam is not that type of boy who will keep her happy'but then she consoled her heart  that no Shivam is nice !!!
She slept off'.
On the other hand'.Shivam was still awake'. He didn't expect this from Sharon' He thought Sharon will be comfortable'.buut no'
Shivam*in mind*- Ye Sharon'kabhi aage badhegi ki nai.? Sirf khud ka hi sochegi kya, mein uska Husband hun'.mere bare me bhul gayi kya.. , kuch to kar Shivam' nahi'abhi nahi..agar abhi se use kuch kia to fir RaiPrakash ki Property to haath se nikal jaegi..aur aisa mein hone nahi de sakta'huh..Sharon..devi'aur unke nakhre'
In frustration he slept off''

*****
Net Day, Morning Time'
In Mumbai..but not in Shivam's House'

A boy , chocolate brown eyes, long silky hairs, tall heighted with a hypnotizing smile..Was ready to get up from bed'. He was relaxing'.stretching his hand in order to remove his laziness'
He got out from bed'.straight away went to the washroom'.grabbed his toothbrush, paste'.brushed his teeth'.
He splash ample amount of water on his face'.
Came out'.took his towel'.took a shower,  wore his Shirt and Jeans'took his Bag'and straight away went to the Dining hall'..for having his breakfast'
"Breakfast Please.." He asked his Mom'
"At last you are here"'. Said his Mom'..
She came out with a plate in which there were 2 Aloo Parathas'with some pickles..
"Ye lo Mr. Swayam Shekhawat , your breakfast"'.. said his Mom..
Swayam- Mrs. Nandini Shekhawat Mom'.jaldi do..nahi to mein late ho jaunga'College ke lie'
Nandini- Wah, aisehi address karoge mujhe , huh ! and fir apna purana Dialogue start kar doge'
"Jaldi do'..nahi to mein late ho jaunga'College ke lie'fir aaunga fir mujhe aane ke baad Dad ke Office bhi jaana hai'thoda rest to chahiye na'jaldi do na Mom"   
Swayam- Haan haan bas bas'meri acting mat karo Mom'please'aap pe suit nahi karta'
Nandini- Ab tu baatein hi karega ya khaega bhi ? Chal le'.

She gave him the plate'He ate the Parathas'.took his bag and went towards the Door'
Nandini also came there..to bid him bye'.
Swayam- Acha Mom, chalta hun , bye'
Nandini- Thik hai Swayam'.ache se jaana'.
Swayam- Haan Mom'.
He turned back'.hugged his Mom'and kissed her on her cheeks'she smiled and kissed on his forehead'.
He took his car and drive off to College'St. Louis !

*****

Here in Shivam's Room'.
Sharon woke up early in the Morning'Freshened up'.
Went to Kitchen to make Breakfast'..for herself and Shivam'.
She made Sandwiches'..and then went upto their Bedroom'.
Sharon- Shivam'uthiye na'apke office jaane ka time ho gaya hai..
No response'
Sharon- Shivam'
She hesitantly  shooked him'
Shivam (irritatedly)- Kya hai huh ? Ruk jao thoda'
Sharon- Vo it's 9am'aur Office'
Shivam- What'!! Tum bhi na'uthane ko bolo to itna late uthati ho'
Sharon was thinking that "Ek to uthya..par fir bhi..mujhpe hi blame.."

He went to the Washroom..took a bath ,dressed in formal and came out'
Shivam- Jaldi , breakfast lagao'
and came down'.at Dining'
Sharon- Ye lijiye Nashta'Sandwiches'.
Shivam- Okk'rakh do..mein kha lunga'.
Sharon- Thik hai'.vaise aap Office se kab lautenge ?
Shivam- Shaam ko 7 baje'.aur kuch chaiye kya tumhe ??
Sharon- Nahi kuch nahi chahhiye'
Shivam ate the Sandwiches and went outside the door'.Sharon came till outside'
Then suddenly something caught his eyes'.that was none other than her Saree'It was beautiful' too rich'and something bad was going in his mind'Sharon didn't understood anything'she just saw him'and waved  her hands as to bid "bye".
He also did the same with a smirk on his face'.and went off in his car'

She went inside' and was going inside when she found her cell ringing' She picked up the phone'
Sharon- Simmi.!! Hey'
Simmi- Heya Sharon'kaisi hai tu yaar ?
Sharon- Mein thik hun yaar , but tujhse gussa bhi hun, you didn't came in my Wedding yaar'
Simmi- Sharon'mere Mom ki tabiyat thik nahi thi that's why yaar, please maaf karde
Sharon- Ohkl..Ohk..Aunti thik hai ?
Simmi- Hmmm'.and ek surprise hai tere liye..
 Sharon- Kya , kya , jaldi bata'
Simmi- Open your Door'.fast !
Sharon- Door..! Acha Ohk..

She went and opened the Door'and was shocked'!! Simmi was in front of her'
Simmi- Hey babes'(she was standing open arms)
Sharon just hugged her tightly'
Both then came inside the house..and sat on the sofa'.

Sharon- What a surprise yaar'tu yahan , Ohh wow'!!
Simmi- Hmm'sirf tere lie'..
Sharon- Aww'.acha kuch legi'?
Simmi- Dekh mujhe kuch bhi khaane pine ka mann nahi hai'tu yahan baith mere saath'.aur mujhe tere wedding ke bare me bata , please'
Sharon- Huh'OK batati hun'.

FLASHBACK'

Sharon was in her room with some friends of her' They all were making Sharon dress beautifully'.
She was wearing a beautiful Red Saari'with a heavy embroidery'.shining jewellery'.great accessories'

Her Chaachi came to see her'.she was astonished to see her like this'this beautiful'.a pretty girl'
Sharon smiled'Renuka hugged her tight'.tears came in her eyes'.She loved Sharon too much'always treated her as her own Daughter'
She applied "Kaajal" behind Sharon's ear'
Renuka- Tumhe kisi ki nazar na lage'
Sharon- Chaachi'.
Renuka- Bohot pyaari lag rahi ho'.( cupped her face )
Sharon- Thank you Chaachi'
Renuka- Umm..wait , tumhari Saari'ko thoda ache se sambhaalna , kahin uske wajah se tum fisal ya gir na jao'
Sharon- Umm'Chaachi, aap thoda ache se thik kar do na , please'
Renuka- Hmm'.

She made her Saari properly'.
Renuka- Ab thik hai'.
Sharon intentionally took out her bindi'.
Renuka- Ye kyon nikala..???
Sharon- Please aap lagaa do na'. ( Tears came in her eyes )
Renuka- Par thik to thi'
She went to take a new bindi from the pack'and came back..and saw her..
Renuka- Ohho'meri bachci kyon ro rahi hai'.
Sharon- Chaachi'vo paayal nikal gayi'pehna do na'( and started crying )
Renuka- Sssh'!
She hugged her tight'.
Renuka(while hugging)- Acha'to tum chahti ko ki mein tumhe tayaar karun, islie jaan bujh ke sab nikal rahi ho'.
Sharon- Mujhe nahi jaana kahin'.
Renuka- Hatt ! Aisa nahi bolte'..chal thik hai mein tujhe pehna deti hun..payal and bindi'.
Sharon- Hmm'
They broke the hug'
Renuka ( while placing the bindi on eher forhead)- Ab don't cry..tumhara Make-Up bigad jaega beta'.

She held Sharon with her shoulders'.
Renuka- Chalo smile..please'.dekho meine payal bhi pehna di'
Sharon- Nodded in negative'
Renuka- Plese'mere lie'.
Sharon smiled''
Renuka- Good girl'chalo abhi mujhe jaane do, baaraat aati hi hogi'.
And kissed her on her forehad'.
Sharon was alone in her Room'.
Sitting idle , thinking about same confusion'
Those thoughts had stuck in her mind'.she was trying to not think the wrong way but'nothing happened'.

Baaraat Arrived'.
Shivam on "Ghodi" , baarati's were Dancing'all were enjoying'.
Shivam's first look went over to the "Aalishaan" Bunglow'.decorated with so much care'.
Lightings'flowers'it was outstanding'
He couldn't believe his Eyes'that he was the Son-in-law of RaiPrakash's'.

All the reeti rivaz took place'
Sharon was called down'.as it was the time was marriage'.
Shivam's eyes were only on Her...

Both of them sat down'.
Pandit'asked Shivam to apply "Sindoor"..
He did the same'
Then "Mangalsutra" pehnao session was going on'.

After all this'everyone ate the dinner'.and then'time for
"Saat-Phere"
They stood up'and were going round and round'.
Took the saat phere..

After some Mantra Chanting'.the time for "Vidayi" arrived'.

Tears were flowing down from Gautam's eyes'.and also from Renuka and her Husband'.
Sharon came and hugged Gautam very tightly'.and cried'.
Gautam- Ssh'beta , ab tum apne dusre ghar jaa rahi ho'to no crying , please'.
Sharon- Au'aur aap..bhi nah..ii ron..na'
Both wiped each other's tears'
Then Sharon came towards Renuka'.
Renuka- Meri bachchi'.( cupped her face )
Sharon- Chaachi'aap..apna..ache se khyaal rakhna..aur sabka'
Renuka- Tub hi beta'.

All the Session ended after some time'.Sharon went with Shivam'to her new house'for a new beginning'.
FLASHBACK ENDS'

Sharon had little tears in her eyes after narrating the whole'she was missing her Family..
Simmi- Ohh..! Wow..I missed it man'
Sharon- Hmm'
Simmi hugged Sharon'
Sharon- Acha Simmi'tumhara college kaise chal raha hai ??
Simmi- Bohot acha'you know Nil is so nice..vo meri bohot care karta hai'.
Sharon- Wow , cool'
Simmi- Vaise tum college kab se aa rahi ho ????
Sharon- Umm..abhi join karungi'Shivam se baat to kar lit hi'Admission karne jaana hai'.
Simmi- Hmmm'Shivam..hai kaisa , tera khyaal to rakhta hai na..?
Sharon- Umm..haan..
Simmi- Chalo acha hai..aur vaise koi bhi problem ho call me , OK..?
Sharon- Ya ya Okay'

They talked for some more time , Simmi had her Lunch in Sharon's house onlly'and then Simmi went off'
At evening'around 7:30'
Shivam came home'She opened the door'.
Sharon- Umm..hello'
Shivam- Hello'babes..
Sharon- *cough*
Shivam- Hmm..mujhe miss kar rahi thi ??
Sharon- Nahi aisi baat nahi hai..
Shivam- Ohkk'.please jaldi khaana lagao'.
Shivam Sharon had Dinner'.after some time..in Bedroom'
Sharon- Vo mujhe kal Shaam ko apne friend ke yahan Party mein jaana hai'
Shivam- Ohh..konsi party..?? Kon de raha hai.?
Sharon- Vo Simmi ke ghar pe hai..aur fir shayad hum sab vaha rukenge one night..
Shivam- Puri raat , tum pagal ho gayi ho kya'Shaadi ke dusre hi din.. ( rudely )
She just got little scared'
Sharon- Umm..a..acha thik hai na..nahi jaungi'.agar aap nahi chaahte to..
Shivam understood that..his plan could fail..thats why he calmed down..
Shivam- Nahi..tum jaa sakti ho'vaise kal hi kyon'?
Sharon- Haan..vo kya hai na.. fir Simmi out of India jaa rahi hai'to hum sab nahi mil paenge'
Shivam- Thik hai'
Sharon- Thank you'

After that they both slept off'not like a couple'just like strangers'

End Of This Chappy
Hmm'..now friends'.your turn'..and please mujhe maarna mat..kyoki I showed our Lover boy in this Chappy'which was not decided before..but some Dhamki's ke kaaran I had to do so'.
I   know many of you are thinking ki when I'll show SwaRon meet'so please guys co-operate'as I need your Support..I will surely make them meet after 1 or 2 Chapters'
hit like tab and shower your precious comments'.
Will be waiting for your response'..Hope you all liked it'.
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Luv,

Sakshi'


Edited by sakshibshah - 9 years ago
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wow... U updated , sharon is so sweet whereas shivam 😡
I loved swayam's entry ..., he and his mom's scene was cute
I liked the update 😃, looking forward for SWARON'S first meeting
Amazing work 👍🏼
Edited by swaron_pk - 11 years ago