SwaRon FF- KiSmAt CoNnEcTiOn NOTE (Pg145) CH-43 Pg 143 *Aug11, 14* - Page 11

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: veronica7

Hey nice concept..👏read both the updates...Loved swayam's entry..

Plz make swaron meet soon..

Needless to say hated cheevam..

thanks for pm..and plz pm me when u update next chap..



Thankss dear..:)

Will PM u :)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: lassipriya

nice update..
Sharon's stated of mind was nicely penned down..
liked d sharon n chachi's part..
swayam n his mom part was cute..
waitg for swaron's meet..



Thankssyy :)

SwaRon meeting , soon.!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Res 😳
btw thanks fr letting me know about this FF :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow I read the two chapters in one vo they both were just fabulous
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Posted: 11 years ago

Hey , Thank you so much for the Response'
Thanks !
I got to know that Spamming on FF is scrictly NO.
Here's next Chap of this FF-
Hope you all will like it'Sorry for the grammatical mistakes..

Recap- Sharon- Haan..vo kya hai na.. fir Simmi out of India jaa rahi hai'to hum sab nahi mil paenge'
Shivam- Thik hai'
Sharon- Thank you'

After that they both slept off'not like a couple'just like strangers'


At Shekhawat Mansion,

Nandini- Uff..! Are Swayam'ruko to'
Swayam- Mom..! Kya hua'?
Nandini- Vo'aaj hame tumhare liye ladki dekhne jaana hai'so aaj tum College nahi jaa rahe ho'
Swayam- Huh..! Firse'Maa..aapko pata hai na mere Terms and Conditions, humne pehle hi 4-5 ladkiyan dekh chuke hai..but they didn't accepted those'
Nandini- Are'ab aisa kuch nahi hoga'dekhna..
Swayam- Ohh..! Acha aap ye kaise keh sakti hain ki ye ladki mere T&C maanegi..?
Nandini-   I think so..and tum ye sab chhoso and trust me'aur jaldi tayaar ho jaana..we'll leave at 11am..
Swayam- Hmm'ek baar aur sahi'( gave a stern smile )
Saying this he went to his room'

*****

Sharon's House,
 Sharon *to herself*- AAj mein Simmi ke ghar jaa rahi hun..so..yeh suit nahi pehnungi..umm jeans top hi'and packing kar hi leti hun'
Shivam- Sharon..[arty khatam hote hi ghar aana..
He said standing behind her..
Sharon- Haan..Shivam'vaise bhi mein aur kahaan jaungi..!
Shivam- Aajkal kisi ka bharosa nahi hai na'
Sharon was shocked hearing this..she turned around and..
Sharon (a bit louder)- Whatt !! Shivam..aapko mujhe par itna bhi bharosa nahi hai to isse achha mein jaati hi nahi hun'thik hai ?
Shivam was angry as she shouted on him but then calmed down and spoke in a sweet voice almost manipulating..come closer to her'
Shivam-  Are are mein tumhe thodi na kuch keh raha tha'mein to general mein baat soch raha tha..and tumne mera sssentence pura hone se pehle hi rok diya'so aage kaise bolta'
Sharon (still unsatisfied)- Huh..!! Agli baar aisa bolna bhi mat , kyonki jis INSAAN ko mujh par bharosa hai hi nahi..mein use kuch nahi maanti , ek LOOSER ke alawa..and us par se mera bharosa uth jaatta hai'
Saying this she went off..Shivam's anger knew no bounds..! He was hell angry and her word LOOSER was ringing in his ears',He now thought to move a step ahead'against Sharon'

Here , Sharon was hell frustrated'
Sharon*in mind*- Hamari wedding ko 1-2 din hi hhue hai..aur ye mujhse aise kyon behave kar rahe hai , meine inhe zyada to nahi bol diya na'.umm'achha leave it'Sharon'


*****
Swayam and his family reached the Girl's house'The family talked, both the families liked the children of opposite one'Now Swayam and the girl was given some time to talk'.

Girl- Aaiye..yaha baith te hain'
Swayam- Okay, fine'.

They both sat in the balcony on separate chairs'

Swayam- Ummm'"Khushi"'kuch important baat karni thi mujhe tumse'
Khushi- Ji boliye'
Swayam- See'to be frank'.yeh shaadi hone se pehle mein tumhare saath kuch discuss karna chahta hun..means I have some Terms and Conditions'is Shaadi ko lekar'
Khushi- Hmmm'.I also wanted to clear something but now please you tell it first'
Swayam- Ohkk'it's just that , firstly, mein studies ko abhi preference dena chahta hun'see mein abhi sirf Shaadi ko wedding tak hi simit rakhna chaht ahun'agar hamari Shaadi hotti hai to'So'are you OK with this ????
Khushi- Vaise, Swayam aap jo keh rahe hain'mein bhi yahi kehna chahti thhhi'.mein abhi Studies pe focus karna chahti hun'and I agree to your T&C , I wanted this only'umm..but ?????
Swayam- But??
Khushi- Mein chahti hhun ki shaadi itne jaldi na ho'.mujhe around 6 months ka gap chahiye'
Swayam- It's totally fine with me'and before a Relationship..can we be just Friends'??

He took his hand out'.in order to shake hands !
Khushi- Yup sure'
She shook hands'and smiled'They both approved fopr the Marriage'.Both the parents knew about their Child's Rules'or Conditions'

Engagement Ceremony was Done'.
They were engaged'but not as a couple just as Friends'!


*****
Swayam was in room'when he received a Call..

"Hello', Hey.."

"Haan say.."

"Hmm..good.."

"Okay'I'll be there.."

"Hmm'yes yaar..I am Engaged.."

"Thankss'.If possible.."

"Tata, byee.."

Call Disconnected

After some hours'
Nandini- Are Swayam'Kaha ja rahe ho beta ???
Swayam- Maa'some work'thoda relaxation chahiye tha..ajj ke liye'vaise bhi 2 din holiday hai, so'
Nandini- Ohk..baba'.be careful'
Swayam- Bye..MAa'Love you'I have to pick her up also..
Nandini- Vo bhi'.??
Swayam- Yes Mom'now she's my Friend's Friend'and mine too'
Nandini- Hmm..go'

Nandini bid him "bye" and He went off in his Car'and She..in the Kitchen'

*****

Shivam was Sharon'She was so happy'Shivam came inside the Room'and just hugged her from back'She within a Second'.turned over and freed herself from him'immediately!

Shivam- Ohh'! Sharon..so Sorry..!!

He maintained some distance,,,
Sharon- Huh'! Please..
And she turned back to work'

Shivam- Vo..tum kaise jaa rahi ho ???
Sharon- Taxi se' (little rude)
Shivam- Thik hai'

Sharon took her stuff and went off'and bid a bye to Shivam'.

Whole one night without that Chee-vam'.She will be so relaxed'

*****

Sharon reached Simmi's House'. As soon as She entered..Simmi hugged her tight'..

Simmi- Sharon..sharon..Sharon'.come in fast babes'
Sharon- Ya ya'coming baba'

She came inside'saw Simmi's other friends'., She only was familiar with Vicky, and Neha'.

Sharon- Hy Vicky Neha'
ViHa- Heya Sharon'!
Simmi- Umm'guys , let me introduce Sharon to others'.
Guys, See..my Close friend'.Sharon'
Sharon- Hey..friends'
Simmi- Sharon'see..this Rey..this Rinni, here Bharat'Amar'Ashi..that's Nilesh.., Taani'and'd..m..
(cut by someone)

"Mujhe nahi introduce karwaogi'Simmi.."
A voice disturbed them' Simmi turned back'.
Simmi- Hey'come yaar, tujhe kon bhul sakta hai'

Simmi and the person entered'
Simmi- Sharon'this is'"Swayam'" and Swayam this is my closest Sharon'

Swayam forwarded his hands', both shook their hands'.
Simmi- Swayam, tum Khushi ko lekar nahi aaye..??
Swayam- Ya..meine usse pucha but vo ane relatives me Busy thi'
Simmi- Ohkay'let it be..you enjoy'and yeh Good news sabko to sunao'
Swayam- Yaah'friends'Khushi is My Fiance'I am Engaged'!
All (except Sharon n Simmi)- What !!!
Swayam just nodded.,..
Bharat- Saale..ttune bataya bhi nahi na'?
Nilesh- Haan'hum sab ko to bhul hi gaya tu'
Aashi- Haan'hum sab to apke Friend Types hai na'to'
Swayam- are ruko !!!!!! Aaj ! n vo bhi jaldi jaldi mein sab ho gaya ! But guys don't worry Shaadi ko abhi 6 mahine hai'
tab to sabko aana hi hai'
Neha- Haan..vo to tum nahi bulaoge tab bhi we all coming'haina..??
All- Yaa, of course'

Swayam smiled on this..
All the boys sat opposite the girls'
They decided to play "Damsharaz"
Simmi- guys..but ek hi team mein 6 girls n opposite mein 6 boys'yeh kuch zyada ho jaega..
Rey- are guys, simple, hum sab apne apne partners ke saath ho jaate hain.
Rinni- Ohkay..
All the boys sat with their Respective Girlfriends'except Swayam n Sharon..
Swayam- Guyss ! ye idea nahi chalega , I am alone..
Vicky- are Swayam, tu tension kyon leta hai'jaise Sharon akeli baithi hai, tu uske team mein ho ja'.
Swayam- Are tu kya bol raha hai yaar'kuch dusra idea soch na'
Sharon- Umm'listen Swayam..agar tum soch rahe ho ki mein comfortable hun ya nahi so don't worry, I am fine..
Swayam- Ohkay then..we'll play'.

SwaRon decided that Swayam will act and Sharon will guess the movie..
Same happened with every couple'.
The game started. First one was RiMar'
Amar acted but Rinni could not guess'.
Every couple performed from which NiMmi and Taarey could guess', the last one was SwaRon..
Swayam stood up'.and came in front of Sharon..
Taani spoke the name of a movie in his ears'
He was good at acting but still was some shy with a new girl'

He took out four fingers'
Sharon- 4 words ?
Swayam nodded in positive..
Swayam then indicated a heart shape with hid fingers..
Sharon- Dil'!
Swayam nodded but still unsatisfied,,he indicated that its not the full word..
Sharon- Umm..leave the 1st..tell 2nd word ???
He indicated something'
Sharon- Dulhan ??
Swayam nodded..
Simmi- Jaldi guys'time ja raha hai..
 Sharon- Jaldi Swayam,,, please'
He tried to act the last 2 words but could not act well'only one option was left'
Sharon- Kuch to karo'please'batao'
Swayam hesitantly came towards her'and gave "jo  mein karunga vo btana mein kya kar raha hun" wala look'
Sharon- Okay.
He came close to  her and immediately scooped her in his arms'
She was in "awe" , eyes wide-opened'she was not in a state to answer'the moment was so immediate as to she didn't got a chance to say anything'
He took her in her arms and walked some..
She tried to guess'
 Dil-Dulhan-Le jaana
Sharon- Kya ho sakta  hai..!
All- Tick tick'1..
Sharon- Dil-Dulhan-Le jaana'umm'
are vo'.SRK aur Kajol'ki film'vo'
Swayam- Fast..!!
Sharon- Are  haan'it's DDLJ'Dilwale dulhaniyaa Le Jaenge'
Swayam- Yyaaa !!!! We won..
Sharon- Yipiee'I guessed it right'.

Swayam unknowingly twirled round'.
All were observing them'.Swayam didn't realize their position'Sharon was feeling awkward , uncomfortable..
Sharon-  Stop..Swayam..
He realized it and stopped'
Swayam put her down and
Swayam- Sorry..Sharon'so sorrry , I dint mean to hurt you'
Sharon- Whatever'
She left ! Gang was shocked.
Swayam felt sorry for it'.he went behind her'
Swayam- Sharon'
Sharon- No response'.
He stood behind her'
Swayam- Sorry..
Sharon- It's Okay..
Swayam- I know you are not comfortable'vo to mein jitney ki khushi mein itna excited ho gaya tha ki mein bhul hi gaya ki you were in my han..hands..
Sharon- It's fine , I said na'( said sweetly )
Swayam- Thank you'very much..
Then he left'

Sharon felt little awkward , firstly Shivam then Swayam'
Sharon was stilll not satisfied with Shivam's behavior..she decided to talk to Simmi'
Swayam came out and smiled at the Gang'they felt relief'.
Everyone was busy in some or the other thing'when Sharon dragged Simmi with her'.
Sharon- Simmi'aa na..
Simmi- Haan bol'
Sharon- Akele mein, please'
Simmi- Kya hua..??
Sharon without answering took her in a Room and locked it'.
Sharon- Vo'mujhe tujhse kuch important baar karni hai..
Simmi- Hmm..say it..
Sharon- Vo'

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End Of This Chappy
Hmm'..how was the Chap..?? Showed SwaRon..expect kiya tha, SwaRon at Simmi's House.. ??
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Edited by sakshibshah - 9 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
amazing update
swayam also getting married nd he endgaged with khushi😭
finally tune swaron ko milva hi diya
Swayam twirled her around!!Awiee!!😳
Edited by angel_luvkreya - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

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nice update..glad sharon is a diva in this ff and did not silently accept that che-vam's nonsense..Swayam got engaged 🤔..

loved the small swaron scene..i wonder how will their equation change..but i m sure u'll come up with something..

Waiting to read more..

Edited by SwaRon_rocks - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesomeee update👏
swaron met😃
loved it😊
waiting for d nxt part😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
fantastic update...

swayam n sharon finally mile toh...

update soon...
Edited by .....pujan..... - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awww. i loved the DDLJ wala part SO cute! :P

absoluely an awesome update! keep up the good updates! :D
annnddd. thanks for the pm!