An ArHi Fairy Tale#3*Happily Ever After*Completed

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Maya

@What_the

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#61

I love fantasy too...n this was a perfect fairytale...with the right amount of love and magic...im sad it ended though...

Splendid job!

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lilakumariacnw

@lilakumariacnw

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#62

Ofcourse... Fairy tale have simple ending... Becoz they are for kids...
Should be happily everafter... Becoz it should make kids happy & peaceful for them to sleep...
I am getting sleepy... Goodnight

So that was PERFECT...

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subiscs

@subiscs

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#63

Awww...my fav story comes to an end...lovely tale ya!!!😊

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afsha

@-afsha-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#64

That was awesum ending

Loved it

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Denaid

@Denaid

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#65

That was beautifully written..I'm a sucker for happy endings. I was crying by the end of the fairy tale..partly because of how well it was written and partly because it ended...buaaahhhaaahhh...????

Do write a fantasy sometime again...ur good at it..i was so emotional during the sweet kiss part, I was imagining sleeping beauty and snow white..it took me back to my childhood when everything felt like fairytale..the reality of this cruel world far from one's life..if only..

All in all, great story..I had as much fun reading it as u had writing it..

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XBosyX

@XBosyX

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#66

thats was so beautiful update
and it was so beautiful happy ending
just loved it

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-memorable-

@-memorable-

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#67

a true fairy tale *sigh*

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nazca

@nazca

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#68

They lived happily ever after. You touched all my fairy tales princess with our own princess kushi. It was so nice. Started simply and ended simply with light hearted.

"Colorin Colorado este cuento se ha acabado
Zapatito roto, espero tu cuento otro" - saying in Spanish after story telling to the kids.

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bewakoofLadki

@bewakoofLadki

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#69

fantasy is nt my type...i would b lying if i sed i understood everything ...half d tym i would keep d dictionary open...no m nt dat bad in english...n m nt a kid tooo...bt i hav never ever read fantasy story..(no magic stories...no harry pottr..no vampire..no narnia)...it was" you", ur great way of writing n ur sense d way u write made me took a chance to read...

n i wouldnt dare miss d note u write at d starting n ending of d chapter...dey make me laugh.,make me think...n again sumthing make me wonder...

keeep writting plsss...great writters like u hav make my adddiction to novels disappear...instead m searchng IF fr guuud stories...

c u around