An ArHi Fairy Tale#3*Happily Ever After*Completed

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fareeha

@pinkpearlz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#81

am feeling as if got happily ever after. Gosh, it was awesome.

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Aysha

@ayshaomar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#82

this was an amazing story

loved reading it and what a fairy tale

obviously there was the good, the evil and twists and turns but no fairy tale is complete without it

i love how you went into a completely different genre of writing than what many have wrote on this fab couple

anyways once again you did an amazing job with this😊

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

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Posted: 12 years ago

#83

haiyye main mar jawan
maar hi daala iss fiary tale ne ji
it was the true love's kiss
but what made me laugh was the fact that they were made to sleep in different rooms after their kiss fest you could say
and that had him truly mad for sure am sure right which is why they married so quickly
wait if they had kissed already what was the second option then
and finally the most awaited thing happened
they kissed for the very first time
well it was initially first to make sure she comes back to him again with her soul
but that wasnt the case later on for sure
later it was because they wanted to kiss
and they have waited a long time to do the same
was it magical beuatiful and all the adjactives matching to it hell yes dear
man now am becoming even more of a fan of fairy tales after reading this one and if you decide to write more fairy tales i will be only too happy to read the same
so alls well that ends well huh
anji is alive akash and la are getting together
khushi step mother has been gotten rid off
the devil cant reach khushi at all well they made sure of that
and lastly our arhi are married thats the best thing ever
so it was a happily ever after after all
cheers for pm
cant wait for more stories from you in the future

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farha623

@farha623

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Posted: 12 years ago

#84

I love happily ever afters =)=)

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-DobByDoDgeR-

@-DobByDoDgeR-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#85

And you DIDN'T forgot to write 'and they lived happily ever after':)
It was brilliant... The updates were quite regular, sometimes making you cry , sometimes making you blush at the way you described their relationship, making you happy, curious... Everything...
Loved the creativeness of this story too... Thank you so much for taking me on this journey of love...:)

Edited by Chotteskhushi19 - 12 years ago

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Zarahatke

@Zarahatke

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#86

Yaaar i read fairy tale after a longgg time
As no age for fairy tale but this was a beautiful awesome fairytale
Love ur beautiful writing
And enjoy the whole story
U r a brilliant writer keep it up and keep writing n never forget to pm

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sur91

@sur91

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Posted: 12 years ago

#87

I'm so happy and a little sad after reading this chapter. Happy coz "they lived happily ever after" and sad coz one of my most favourite stories ended.
I'm a big fan of fairytales coz its gives u an escape from ur real life problems and take u to a world of hope and happiness and when u put ArHi in that context then it becomes all the more magical.
I loved this chapter as u closed all the loops beautifully and we got a first kiss of true love too.
I hope u wrote more such fantasy stories in the future

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bhadraprasad

@bhadraprasad

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#88

Beautiful ending...😊.Even now fairy tales have their own charm...
Could read the last few updates now only due towork pressure...Awesome updates
Sorry for the late comments.
A beautiful story...
I would surely carry this in my heart forever
Hats off to you dear
Thx for the PM

Edited by bhadraprasad - 12 years ago

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mishti_17

@mishti_17

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#89

Congrats on the new thread..

Loved the update.. So finally Anjali is out of the curse.. I loved the way Khushi was got back..☺️ Their marriage and then the happily ever after.. 🤗

U are an amazing writer.. Ive always been a big fan of fairy tales and like u said, one on your favorite jodi makes you go in heaven.. Thank you for this beautiful journey..