Hey... Shahi...
Sorry for the late comment...
Both the chappys were awesome...
Just add every good adjective here...
I would comment chappy wise...
Chappy 34
I was crying throughout the chappy...
I am not complaining though...
Because it was worth it...
As it shows that how much brilliant of a writer you are...
When Uday was in so much pain...
I was feeling it too...
Manyata remembers her family even Karan but doen not remember Uday or anybody of his family...
And now I think that she would want to go to Karan...
I hope it does not happen...
So her body wants him but her mind rejects him...
The last scene was so intense...
And now that Manyata has gone in the rain to take care of Uday..
I hope to see some romance...
And yes when I was reading the chappy even I was thinking of The Vow and even Jab Tak Hai Jaan for matter...
Chappy 35
Oohhh... This is getting so much more interesting...
So first they have a wonderful kiss...
And then Manyata declines to have any feelings for him..
Bad bad girl I must say...
But its not her fault too...
Ohh god... I missed this Uday so much...
And now he is back with a bang...
So they would have a beautiful love making now...
Last line of Uday's was just so naughty...
So it is the end of Book 2...
A big congo for Book 3...
Update soon...
And thanx for the PMs..
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