Arhi FF: CheckMate! T3- Epilogue updated - Page 39

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Posted: 11 years ago
thanks 4 pm

sid face suit hm z best
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Posted: 11 years ago
All the characters u have chosen do fit for actors...

Thanx for pm...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Came across this FF and couldn't resist reading all the parts in one go. Must say , it's one of the best suspense , twisted story on IPK. Loved the characters and the turns you had given in the story like Shyam turns out to be an IPS officer, Dadi is good, Arnav has a step brother.
Arnav n Khusi's character developed throughout the journey. Loved the strong Khusi here. And Arush is really cute. He's helping Arnav's bond to be more n more strong with Khusi.
Do pm me when you update next..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Update was very interesting
Arnav forgot all of his anger on seeing khushi in pain. Khushi was touched by arnav's care and love for her.
little Arush is just his father's son. This little guy proved to be more intelligent then all the adults put together. He was able to find the mic, which is a big clue for all of them.
Sid is right, rana would plan to target arush. Hope that this time they will be able to trap rana.
All the characters are perfect. But did not get to see little arush's pic.
please continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
gr8888...d little baby give dem a clue...rana tu to gyaaa...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
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Posted: 11 years ago
soo sweet...loved d baby keya's pic...
all d characters r well described plus ur selection of actor is gr8...but one thing talat rekhi as RANA...i don't think this character suit him...as he is a little soft looking...but d character of RANA is fox like cunning and sharp...plzz don't mind...
thnk's for d PM...
Edited by manikka - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Your picturisation of characters makes the FF more real...



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Posted: 11 years ago

Vi ki bachi read both 66 and 67 and loved 66 and u know whyy

 
he he but that was super cufe and u worte it neatly
 
its getting nail gripping again
 
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb updates!!
wow... cant wait to read what happens at the farm house party, or at RM at that time!! very interesting & exciting!! update soon plzz 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Cannot wait!please update.