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Posted: 11 years ago

Loved it Sona..

I have always wanted this minus Shyam fiasco..

Arnav coming to the point that he loves Khushi and that slow smile rising on his lips is creating an amazing sight in my head..

Khushi laughed at him after he declared his love!! Only Khushi can do that... But then holding hands feels so completed and satisfying.. Amazing..

Please continue with your withdrawal symptoms.. I want more like these.. Please its a request..

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curiousbookworm

@curiousbookworm

Senior Member

Posted: 11 years ago

Wow. I am experiencing withdrawal symptoms too. I wish it had been like this on the show.

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summaiya

@summaiyasayed

IF-Sizzlerz

Posted: 11 years ago

nice updt

luv it

thanks for pm

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garash

@garash

Groupbie

Posted: 11 years ago

loved it. Why could this not happen in the serial thank you for writing a wonderful scene

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__blossom__

@__blossom__

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

Awww...its ok to dream right??? Wat they could have made out of the show and wat they made...
Lovely os!

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emistry

@emistry

IF-Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

you haven't gone crazy!

This was perfect what if!!!! also from some who is also is going through IPPKND withdrawals, this was a welcome respite!

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

IF-Sizzlerz

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

wow a beautiful one sona

brilliantly written

loved it - thx for the pm

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mysticmanthri

@mysticmanthri

Senior Member

Posted: 11 years ago

if going crazy gives out this one then get more crazier by the day !

wonderful ...how blissful it would have been to arnav that he named his feelings and spoke out loud to be reciprocated without the drama and for khushi to hear those from arnav ... successful first love how many would say so...beautiful

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tvbuf

@tvbuf

IF-Sizzlerz

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

Beautifully written

Thanks 😛

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snoopy84

@snoopy84

IF-Sizzlerz

Posted: 11 years ago

aww that was real cute loved it

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