OS| The Very First Time - Page 6

that was great. I am missing IPK a lot too and feel better after reading your post.  

That one shot was so stupendously, unerringly delivered into the bullseye..!!😉😉😊 Just one word to describe it- - - BRILLIANT👏 Why dont you come ahead and conjure up an INDEX with some long, wholesome ARSHI fiction shots for all of us to remeber you for posterity!! PM me any future plans at the genius striking; any forthcoming FF's and SS's😃Thanx..!!

This is so beautiful. Loved the os. I always wanted to know what would have happened if he had confessed his feelings towards Khushi during the wedding. 

god that was beautiful. stunning. gorgeous. read it with a constant smile on my face, imagining how things would have turned out if this were true,

That was really gud!I am sure this would have happened your way if Shyam had not come in their way!Sigh!

b.e.a.u.t.i.f.u.l... 

That was beautiful!

awesome OS! You write so well. This was very enjoyable to read. I also always wondered what would have happened if Shyam didn't exist. Your story helps us imagine what could have been, if all that misunderstanding didn't happen. Awesome job!

This was beautiful!

Omg...this has now become my dream scene...i wish writers like u were in the cv team, the above scene was just perfect.,,loved it to core..keep up ure withdrawal symptoms then we readers will get more master pices like this...,..,