OS| The Very First Time - Page 2

wow wished it went like this

Originally posted by: V323

Sona... I don't know about bat shit crazy, but yes, this is how I wanted it on the show.

Your writings have this aura of elegance around them. Calling them things like awesome and amazing seems... wrong. Beautiful, elegant, charming... adjectives of the olde world aura, basically.

 

When I was reading this, this is the song that came to my head -

 

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_PkzsMak6P8[/YOUTUBE]

I am in love with this OS...

Awww...Sona...*hugs*
This was absolutely beautiful...i am watching the descriibed scenes again and falling in love with Arnav and Khushi and Barun and Sanaya again...:) :)
I always wondered what would have happened had Arnav not seen Shyam with Khushi..i woukd have loved if the serial had taken this route...
I so so loved this OS...it brought back old memories when IPK had iits golden days...
I am missing my serial..makers never did justice to this

I loved the OS...you did justice to this story or let me say you just made the actual Arnav and Khushi's story more beautiful..

Love you Sona...
Take care...

Such a beautiful OS sona!!!

cute.

Hai kaash. Hai kaash. Hai kaash.

You are meant to be a writer and a world class one at that. There are two aspects about any story. The idea and the execution. The idea is simple. Arnav recognises, accepts and declares his love for Khushi.

The execution is brilliant. Your prose is poetry. No author on this forum can do that.

Thanks for writing such a sigh inducing, aww worthy one shot

tooo gud...
jst loved it...😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
gr8 job...

I am speechless after reading this OS😳 Edited by Gazal.. - 11 years ago

that was an awesome os👏