Saacha Pyaar...Virman FF Chapter 8 updated!!!

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virmanian2

@virmanian2

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Chapter 2
Manvi and jeevika had fallen asleep earlier but jeevika wakes up as soon as she receives a phone call from the designing company. They called them to be part of the award ceremony and start their 3 weeks training. As soon as jeevika hears this she screams of happiness and this makes manvi awake and asks jeevika immediately ...

M: jeevika.. Kya hu? Tum chilla kyun rahi hon? Sab thik tho hai nah?? Kya hua??

Manvi just asks questions non stop!

J: chill Manu! Thule pata hai aabhi aabhi kiosks call aayo tha??

M: kiska??

J: wahi se jaha aaj hum interview me liye Gaye thye!!! Uno ne kaha hai ki Hume aaj hone wali award ceremony per Jana hai aur wahi ke designs ko dhyaan mein rakh kar Hume 3 weeks ke training leen padigi .. Aur hum officially Kah kar sakate hai!!!!! :)))

M: wow.. Saachi!!!! ... (Hugs jeevika tightly and jeevika hugs her back)

M: they seem to be really nice people .. Don't they?? Mere resumes nah hone ki bad bi! They called us for interview and now directly for training !!! Dee jab hum waha pouchenge nah! Hume waha ki owner ko thanks karna chiye!! Hai nah!!!

J: bilkul thik kaha Manu tu ne!! Chal an phata phat ready hoja!! Aur Hume Nikal nah chiyea!!!

After getting ready they left! :)))))))))))

precap!:::::: Virat finds a pyaal laying on the floor Nd picks it ip nd keeps it wid him!!

Virika: as jeevika was writing down the things and looking up! She bumps wid viren and he catches her and a long eye lock! And their cute introduction!!!

Chapter 3!

As viren and Virat finish up their food they went up to the couple and congratulated them, and the couple and their also thanked viren and his company for such a good organization and the wonderful security throughout the city which was managed by Virat!

After that the award ceremony finally begun! Manvi and jeevika settled at the very back and watched the award ceremony!

Meanwhile in the middle manvi excuses herself to the washroom as she hated speeches and sitting somewhere and listening to lectures was not her thing at all! And jeevika knew abt this all and she slowly laughed at manvi and let her go!

And the other side .. Virat was looking of an excuse for himself to get out of the "boring" so called award ceremony in a wedding! That's Wat he had thought when viren had told him at it.

And finally .. Virat's phone rings and it was a call from Karan .. That reminds Virat about the mital case and excuses himself as viren understood by looking at the call id!

Virat goes towards the main hall of the house .. Where it was quite and he could talk to Karan calmly!

V: Haan Karan? Much pata Chala kya? Use mital wala case ko le kar?

K: Haan Virat! Meine Tujhe ye batane ke liye ph kiya tha ki .. The victim finally put the blame on mr. Mital and they have been called to the court tomorrow morning at 9 and she also mentioned that the reason she was hiding the truth all these days was because she was threatened by mital and his people but she finally let it out when we promised her for her and her family's security!

V: wow! That's a great news! Congrats to u as well! And people like mital should be punished to the core for all th bad deeds that he has done till now but not anymore! Okay thanks and I will talk to u later bye!

K: bye and ur welcome! :)) will see ya'

As Virat was hung up he was about go leave when he hears the sound of the payaals! They sounded soo soothing and every sound sounded like a perfect step! He could tell by the sound that the person is walking away as the sound was disappearing in each step .. He quickly puts his phone in his pocket and runs towards the sound .. Following it! But :( as soon as he gets up stairs he hears the door closed and the sound if payaal stopped! Then he comes down! But as he was comin down by the stair he finds a pyaal that was lying there! It was beautifully designed and looked really beautiful! He shakes it and smiles as he recognizes it was the same sound he was following! He puts it in his pocket and goes back to viren!

Manvi in the restroom!

M: hai Bhagwan! Kab khatam hoga yeh Saab! Agar khan mein bhi yeh Saab sunn ki bait nah parcha tho? Mein toh saachi death ho jaoungy!

Comes out of the bathroom helplessly and goes down t join jeevika!

And finally the ceremony was done! And the rest of the rituals of the wedding continued! Manvi insisted jeevika to go home but jeevika denies it as she wanted to note some more things!

J: Manu .. Bas 10 more mins and we wil leave huh! Tab tak tu? Haan! Ja jakar kuch kha le! Mein bas abhi aayie!

M: thik hai!

Jeevika goes upstairs and notes few of the designs that were done to the windows with roses and come down! As she was coming he legs slips and she almost fells but .. A strong arm caught s her by her waist! She closes her eyes tight but as she felts the grip she opens her eyes and fixes herself!

She smiles as she sees the person was viren vadera! Her boss!

J: thank you ! Hi m jeevika! Mujhe Saha mam ne bulaya hai! 3 weeks ke training ke liye! As in new intern.

V: Oo ya' hi .. M mr. Viren vadera! And welcome to our company! But I thought there were two interns .. Weren't there???

J: yes! She is my best friend! She must be here somewhere! I can look of her if u want. (Looks around for manvi)

V: no no . That's all right! I will meet her in office tomorrow and I hope aap ko details mil gayi ho!

J: yeah sir!

V: callme viren!

J: yes! Sir, I mean viren sir. (Shakes her head and says) yes viren!

Okay guys this is it!! Don't kill me cuz of having virika's convo but nt virman .. But promise the next time i do it .. I will have only virman and their meeting! N some romances! Soo stay turned on!!! :)) and thanks for reading it!!!

And can someone tell me how to do chapters in same thread! I have just been adding chapters in the same topic !! Idk how to do it in different pages like other people's ss or ff! Plzzz someone help!

Chapter 4
As they reached home, they ate something and drifted of to sleep.
And here the other side virat, standing infront of the mirror, holding the payaal and recalls the moments of the sounds and plays with it and wonders whose pyaal was it.
Then he pulls out a small box out of his drawer and keeps the payaal inside and goes to his bed and lies down but could not stop himself from thinking about the pyaal and the sound of it, it made him feel like it was someone's that he knew the person and he had to meet that person, he was feeling a bit weird about his feelings but his heart agreed to it. And after a hour of tries he drifted off to sleep. But the other side of the room, viren was trying the same thing as well... trying to sleep and to stop thinking about how beautiful jeevika was her amazing eyes!!..but after a while he fell assleep as well..

okay ...done fo now ..i know i had said i will come up with a virman convo but i have to give out some more details befor their meet soo sorry but will in other chapter ..de read and tell me how is it and if u have any ideas ..can share wid me !!..add me in ur buddy list so i can pm u guys ..NOT DOING PM UNTIL I HAVE A DECENT # OF PEOPLE
Thanks guys ..love ya all.. <3

Edited by virmanian2 - 12 years ago

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kalpana

@jia123sagar

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

superb update

but very short

plz cont soon

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kulsum_virman

@kulsum_virman

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

this was soo short nd no virman😭
plz plz plz update soon with lots of virman updates ...😊

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Syed695

@Syed695

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Nice update...bt short...waiting fr VirMan's meeting...:)

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virmanian2

@virmanian2

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Chapter 5

Virat wakes up and freshens up, as he was coming out of the bathroom he finds viren in his bedroom ..waiting for him.

he goes by him who was completely lost in his own world, virat taps his shoulder and asks

v: 'viren , kya hua ... subha subha tu mere bedroom mein? sab thik to hai nah?'
Vi: ' arrey tu kab aaya .. haan sab thik hai .. was just waiting for u to come out of bathroom' says viren coming out of this thought.

virat tries bringing up the topic about why was he lost but viren says it nothing serious and they leave for their job after having breakfast.

The other side at the same time, manvi wakes up and finds jeevi sleeping peacefully next to her. This was the first time she wuke up before jeevika.. she laught at her thought and freshens up and makes break fast for both of them,, aloo paratha ..their favorite food for all time.

then she went to get dress, it was an very special day fo them, they have waited days and days to get into wht they have wanted to do and finally today was the day, fo some reason manvi was feeling really very excited and a bit nervous as it was her first time going out and working. she sometimes thought she wanted to be the same manvi when her parents were alive. after their death her bubblyness was lost somewhere but the respect that she had for people was never lost. she still was caring but wasn't full of life anymore, she didn't had any reason to live until jeevika came in her life and brought her out from the darkness and she was really thankful fo that. but still she couldn't be the same manvi even when jeevika was there with her, she wanted someone who can make here feel safe around his arms and stays with her throughout her life, she knew her prince charming wil come some day to get her and they will have the "happily ever after" like every story. she came out of her thought as she heard jeevika calling from out side of the room.

J: 'mannu, breakfast already ready hai? kisne banaya?'
M: meina banaya!' says manvi smiling.
j: 'arrey wah!, aaj itini jaaldi uth gayi tu ??'
M; haan ... ab chalo jaldi se ready ho jaathe hai..we can't be late in the very first day.'
J: ' haan chal'

Maanvi wears a simple white anarkali suit. something like this.

and jeeevika wears something like this, and she really cared abt wht she wears throughtout the day ..

oops forgot to tell u guys abt wht v boys wore ..

Virat and viren

just imagine them in something like this and imagine a sunglasses fo viren as well.
jeevika and manvi took jeevika's car to the office and as they reached there. sasha mam was waiting fo them and gave them a tour of the building and gave them the list of the thing fo the day and left fo her respective job.
the task for the day was to : meet the new family who were comin to this city fo their daughter's wedding and list thier things that they wanted fo their wedding.
and the next thing was to go shopping for the things tht was listed already.
Virat drops viren and was about to leave but viren stops him and says
Vi: 'Virat tu janna chata that nah ki .ki.. main...khoya hua kyun tha'
V: ' haan.' syas virat coming out of the car.." toh ab batayaga ki ..tu kyun khoya hua tha" as he finish saying this he sees viren blushing a bit and say ' ek min.. yeh koi ..ladhki ka mamla toh nahi hai nah ..' viren blushes hard and virat laughs and teses him.

Vi: "arrey asa koi baat nahi hai.. woh bas."
V " arrey yar ...kyun chupa rahe hoon .and hwen will i get to seemy whone waali bhavi?"
Vi: tujhe isile liye toh uttara hai ..chal..haan lekin ..meine usse kal hi dekha hai aur kuch nahi kaha hai ..she is the new intern in our office..>"
V: " Aacha.!....ab chale ..mujhe unne dekh nah hai."
Vi: "Haan chal."
Viren leads virat to the office and looks for jeevika ..but couldn't find her then he asks sasha ans she says they are in the hall.. decorating it.
then they went there ..manvi and jeevika were both on different stool ..hanging the lights and taping them on the walls..
they could only see their back as they were facing the other direction.
As manvi was hanging she trues to move a little but her leg slips and she almost feels ..virat sees it and runs to grab her, he grabs her by her waist. her eyes were tightly closed and didn't opened for a while ..and where where was he was completely lost in her beauty ..she looked soo beautiful .. a small layer of her hair was on her face and he moves it and tucked it by her ears and looks ate her beautifula nd innocent face.
it was something like this.

and 😉yes i love maaneet as well ...<3 aren't they choo cute..😉

okay guys ..this is it fo now ..i might update a part tonight bt not sure...will try ..and tell me how was sit ..and yes i finally did virman meeting and more convo and fights coming up ...stay on!!..<3 ya 😛😊

Edited by virmanian2 - 12 years ago

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keerthana

@keerthu27

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

aww virman meet.waiting for virman conversation.and pls start with love at first sight pls pls pls no fight.pls pls pls pls pls pls

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kulsum_virman

@kulsum_virman

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

really awesome fantabulous freat and perfect 👍🏼
finally virman met ...am jst soo happy 😊
pls update soon ..😊

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virmanfan013

@virmanfan013

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

HEY I JUST READ ALL THE PARTS OF THIS FF IN ONE GO

AND I MUST SAY IT'S NICE FF😊

NOW WAITING FOR THE NEXT PART AND VIRMAN CONVERSATION

PLZ CONT SOON AND DO TRY TO PM ME PLZ😊

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virmanian2

@virmanian2

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Thanks a lot guys ..it means a lot to me ..i will soon update the next part but can some one tell me hw to pm ?

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virmanian2

@virmanian2

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#20

Chapter 6

Virat somehow manages to come out of his deep thoughts about maanvi's beauty! And helps her to stand straight bt was still lost in her beauty! He kept staring at her big chocolate brown eyes.. Those pink irresistible lips and the perfect figure.. He was completely lost.. And the other side where viren was admiring at jeevika's beauty and jeevika blushing!

Manvi stands straight and finally looks at him. But just leaves right after saying thanks and giving a small smile which obviously killed virat a little Already !!!!
Manvi walks to jeevika and viren and jeevika introduces manvi to viren and soon after virat joins them as well.. Viren gives a winks at virat and looks towards manvi and virat thinks he was talking abt manvi.. And gives a sad face.. Viren gets a bit confuse and excuses himself and virat from there and jevika and manvi gets back to work.

Outside
Vi: 'virat, kya hua? Tu sad sad ka kyun hai?'
V: ' sad ? Kisne kaha ki mein sad hoon? Aacha viren abhi mujhe nikal nah hoga! Bye see ya at night!
V: ' aacha bye'

Virat's office

As he enters the office every single of the workers gets up from their chair and wishes him 'good morning'! It was not only today .. This was since the first day of his work! He was really fun loving and caring but at the same time he was strict and rude! as he had bunch of his own rules that he wanted people to follow. But he was alwys serious towards his work. He ha been awarded for bunch of categories .. Like disciplined and manny others.. A very well known and loved by most of the people, ACP Virat vadera.!
As virat enters his cabin he receives a call from Karan and talks to him abt the success of the mital case and congrats each other. Then he looks towards the other cases and calls some police stations and gives out info in search of some people.

{ sorry guys I have no clue wht really a ACP does during his office time soo m just gonna mention few things that I think they might do but plz don't laugh at it lol! Okay sorry fo the interruption .. Continue reading .. }

After the calls he tries to go back to his work but can't stop himself from thinking about manvi.. He keeps remembering about the fall and her eyes specially .. They were so innocent and irresistible.. He was completely taken away with those eyes!. Then suddenly her remembers the wink that viren had did towards mavi and says
V: 'virat.. Yeh tu kya sooch raha hai? Yeh galat hai.. Woh toh viren ki hai. Tujhe assia nahi sooch nah chayie!. '
And tries to get back to work which was impossible.. He call fo his black tea with half spoon sugar .. Which was his daily routine and freshens his kind and gets back to work but the distraction of manvi's beauty was still there.. He some home manages but fails after a while and gets up and leaves.. He comes out of the office not knowing where he was heading for .. He takes his car out and drives to viren's office.
He parks and goes directly to viren's cabin .. The good thing was that no one was ever there to stop him .. In fact they gave him his way to walk as he was the best ACP who was trusted by the entire state!.
He directly goes to viren's cabin and sits on the chair..
Viren was really surprised.. He thought the virat who doesn't even receives any phone calls of family member during his working hours .. And today he is here in my office in the middle of the day.
Viren get up off his chair and sits next to virat who was lost in a different world.
V:' virat ? Kya hua!? Sab thik toh hai nah? ( puts his hand on virats shoulder and this makes virat to come out of his thought.
V: ' haan? .. Haan Sab thik hai... Woh Bas.. a little headache.! ( virat lies but viren gets concerned as virat never tells anyone even if he was in a real bad state but today he was confessing about it so it may be a bit serious .. Viren thought.)
Vi: ' kab se? Virat phone karke batanah chiye tha nah? Ek min mein doctor ko bula ta hoon?' ( was abt to call but Virat stops him)
V: nahi! Mein think hoon .. Itna serious bhi nahi hai!. Lets go out and have tea?
Vi: ' thik hai .. Chal.
As they were leaving jeevika and maanvi were walking towards viren's cabin and they met at the hallways.

J: 'Good afternoon sir! I mean viren sir!. ' says jeevika blushing!
Vi: ' o hi! Good afternoon!'
J: 'sir woh actully Hume aao ko yeh sharma walli file summit kar nah tha! Actully isse ki saari preparation is done so hum aap ko yeh file de kar list ke shoppings ke liye jaa rahe the. ( all this time manvi was getting info from Sasha mam .. The receptionist. And virat's eyes were obviously on manvi but she hadn't noticed him yet.)
Vi: thik hai aap yeh file mere cabin mein chod de jiye! Aur rahi baat shopping ki tho.. Aabhi Chaliye.. Hum bhi aap ki kuch madat kar linge.. Hum bhi bahar he jah rahe teh.
J: je sir!. ( blush ! )
And the three walked towards reception and waits for manvi!
And a bit later she joins them.
She gets a bit surprised seeing virat there again but she didn't even knew his name and he hadn't properly thanked him so she thought of doing it now.
She walked towards him smiling and said 'Hi! M manvi .. Sorry woh last time mein aap ko aap nah namm Bata nah bhul gayi.'
V: " no no .. It's ok. "
M: " and thank you once again "
V: "thank you ? Kia baat ke liye? ( pretends like he didn't knew )
M: "woh aap ne mujhe girne se bachaya .. Isse liye! Thanks! "
And this was the time when she really looked at him .. He had a muscular body with broad shoulders and a strong jawline. His hair was a normal length and thick but had a bang like style to it in the front. Mischievous dark brown eyes. And his half smirk was captivating. He was incredibly good looking she thought but comes out of her thought when she heard jeevika calling her name.
They both joined virat and viren for tea and went to shopping.

While having tea
Viren texts virat saying

"Kaise laagi? - Vi

"Sweet hai! And really beautiful. Nice choice viren" - V

" aacha? Mein Tere waali nahi .. Aapne wali ki baat kar raha hoon!" - Vi

"Matlab?" -V

"Jeevika" - Vi

Virat was left surprised .. He laughed at him self and smiled at viren's text! They knew each other soo well. Viren already knew virat fell fo manvi. He could tell by look in his Eyes like ways .. Virat didn't really had to say anything .. Viren knew it just by the look of virats eyes .
Viren slimed back and and went fo shopping .. Viren purposely divides the list in two and sends virman to the other side and he and jeevika to the other side of the mall soo they each other can spend sometime with their liked ones. He winks at virat and walks away.

Precap- virman's dosti/ payaar and manvi falling for virat and a passionate rain dance plus some romance..

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