Saacha Pyaar...Virman FF Chapter 8 updated!!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey guys..back after a long break and i am thinking of doin a new FF on Virman..so i have an idea about a short story that i might extend it and make it a bit flonger soo hope you guys will like it and i will try my very best..


Maanvi- A bubbly and sweet ..really carin abt others and full of life.(close to the show)
(virat;'s love intrest in future)
        

Viraat- ACP of Mumbai ... good guy with bunch of rules of his own.. sweet at inside and rude the outside!... (manvi's love intrest in future)



as i will start the story i will introduce new faces and yes there will be virika's parts as well but not as the realtion like in the show ..i will make them as friends or something but not siblings ..soo hope u guys liked the concept and comment below and let me know wht u think of it...
Anykind of feedback is accepted ...



hey guys ..thanks fo the feed back so far ..and fo this one ..its gonna be really short as i have exams from this week soo but i will try to update it soon enough ..will try my very best!!!..and yes i don't think it will be the same ff like the other one i had read that one as well..."tumse hi zindaji" or something close rite..i read it after u mentioned abt ..its really nice an plez continue asap..!!!...
      here it goes..
😊


Manvi chaudary- living in Mumbai ...with her best friend jeevika.
      she moved to mumbai few months ago ..from reshikesh!...manvi waas living by herself all life as her parents ha died in a car accident when she was only 4. since then she was living in an orphanage with other orphans. but a day comes when jeevika ..a fashion designer of New York comes to visit reshikesh and manvi guides her around reshikesh and they become best friends. Jeevika decides to take maanvi with her and live together as she was an orphan as well ..living wid her uncle ..but he also had passed away  years ago.
Manvi hesitates at the beginning but agrees as jeevika assures that they can live in india and she will settle in india ...they both agreed and moved to mumbai. 

Chapter 1- BELOW

Chapter 2- page 2
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Chapter 3- page 2
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Chapter 4- page 2
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Chapter 5- page 3
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Chapter 6- page 4
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Chapter 7 - page 6 
 
Chapter 8 -  page 7


Chapter 1
Jeevika- Mannu ...uth...dek sunrise bhi ho chuka hai..aab toh uth ja...??? 
Manvi- Plz jeevi ..2 min more soone do nahh ..please...???
J- nahi bilkul nahi.. chal uth??? (removes the blanket and pulls her out of the bed ,,, but manvi instead pulls jeevika in her bed and they cuddle together fo 1 min and got up laughing).
They had breakfast and left for their search of jobs like everyother days...

As they got out of their house ..jeevika pulled out her car and they were out fo the day..
they were called to the IWDC( indian wedding designer company) as manvi loved makin arrangements fo occasions and festives..

as they enetered the IWDC ..they showed their papper work to the receptionist and waitied for their turn.
 after waiting fo hours they finally got called inside.

interviwer: "Hi ..please have a seat!"
J and manvi: 'thank u" said both as they took their seat.
The interviewer asked them for their resumes and other paper works and asked other questions throughout the interview!
the interview went well and they headed back to home.

They both obviously were exhausted of waiting ..they quickly ate dinner and went to bed.!!!

Virat vadera
" hello, haan bolo karan ...kuch khaber aaya usse mital wala case ko le kar?"
Karan(  a very good friend ot virat as well as his assistant)
K: "nahi virat ..lekin don't worry ..as soon as i get something i will call ya"
V: Thik hai..bye." says virat vadera..

Virat lives alone but has a bestfriend of child wood named as viren vadera. viren's parents adopted virat when his parents died as they were good family and business partner since ages. But one day viren's parent passed away as well and since then they are living together ..even tho they have their own houses..they live in each others equally.
Viren Vadera is an fine and famous wedding pplanner of India and is very well know throughout other countries.

Virat hangs up and comes down to the hall where viren was waiting for him.
Vi: Chale?" asks viren
V: "Haan"
and again as they were walking out virat asks again..
v: "viren yr..kya mera jaana jaruri (nessacery) hai?"
Asks virat.
Vi: " arrey yr..chal nah ..mein waha aakele bore ho jawanga."
v: "thik hai chalo."
 virat pulls out his car and they left for a wedding that was organized by viren's company and also were having a award ceremony from the family as they loved the designs and wanted to thank viren about the arrangements.

Pre- cap--- As virat was attending a call ..he hears beautiful sounds of payals and follows the sound...!!!!

(and yes thats manvi's payaal



Okay this is it for now ..will post as soon i will be done wid my exams..
please give me ur feedback ..and sorry abt the errors😳
hope u all like it..😉


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Posted: 12 years ago
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That's really good...
i have little similar ff...
but yesss...i m sure it iwll be completely different and will be treat to read
Start soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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sounds interesting...u should continue... already i m reading one ff with the same name sachcha pyar...start soon...i would love to read it...and title is a bit confusing...to make it clear mention FF in ur title...just a suggestion...
Edited by madhavichowdary - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thank you guys and next chapter coming tonight!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Its really interesting concept and yu write welll :-)
Pls do pm me I will be waiting :-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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😛Thanks guys for liking and reading it! I would love to pm people but I have no clue abut it as m new in this forum! I would be really happy if someone could help me through it! Thanks guys once again and will try to update it soon and make it longer wid virman's romantic scenes in it! 😉
Plzzz help?!!! 😕
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Waaaooo yr amazinggg start
i hv just read all.parts
dey r really superbbb plzzz
update asap nd pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Where is part 3?i can't find it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice ...Liked chapter 3...milke bhi mile..Apt song for the update...Milke bhi na mille...PM me when u update next.. :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow he took her payal 😉
interesting bth are kinda same hate those boring speeches ...😊
lovely update pls next time more of virman ...and do pm me 😊

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