MG FF:A torn relation pt link to thraed 2 pg 1

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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CHARACTER'S
MAAN KHURANA AND GEET MAAN KHURANA


    
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~PROLOGUE~


She was sitting in the corner a fear , a longing a hurt was visible on her face she was clutching her knees sitting with a fear " WHAT WILL HE SAY " His reaction she was like a rag doll sitting with tears spilling from her doe shaped hazels .

He roughly pulled her to him making her fall on him . She was crying weeping silently she couldnt gather the courage to meet his eyes she probably could not afford to meet his eyes which were spitting fire on her... On their unborn in a sudden discomfort she started going away from him backing to the wall , his anger and rage was getting high , she was trembling like a feather when he again shouted on her...


maan : kyun nahi bolti bolo whose child is this whom you are trying to get through me ... BOLO he roared


he was shouting hurting her with his words.. She wanted to tell him clear him "cheenk cheenk kar kehna chahti thi " but that pains that torture that still she is enduring in her heart is something that made her numb everytime... When he again yelled she replied in a feeble choking voice before collapsing on the ground ...


geet : aa.a...pka hai ye bacha hamara ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#5

quite an interesting start
please continue soon
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nice dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
#7
Awesome Concept Dear ðŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 11 years ago
#8
nice start
loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
#9
simply awesome...loved it...
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#10

intriguing ...n different too
continue soon ..