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~A TORN RELATION~


PART 7

maan's point of view continues...

this update is specially for valli di first time someone asked me for this SS update so here it is

Maan : everyone please enjoy yourselves'.

His voice , his senses were filled with bitterness'.. he was gulping drinks' there were no counts '.. he was drunk'.

The girls dragged him to the dance floor'. Their were his business rivals too'. The girls tried to dance sensously like seducing maan.. but he just pushed the every other girl'.

No matter how much he Is drunk but even in his loathing , revenge or bitterness he knew that he will never do anything that he will have to regret all his life'..

He pushed all the girls that came in his way ' he knew that they just care for one thing that is MONEY , STATUS and nothing can bug him to again lose himself in a killing monster just like ayesha.. now even in his drunk state he was so confident that wahtever he did to her was much better ' that wretched woman tried to make him her prey so that she could easily get to his rival.. well wouldn't have mind.. never' just because MAAN SINGH KHURANA had only learned to do everything with his full devotion and concentration whether it is love or hate'. Just make sure that you excel in every thing you do'.. no matter how you win'. Principles does matter in his life but to a certain limit.. when his enemy or friend will cross that thin line then they just need to remember that MAAN SINGH KHURANA never leaves anything unpayed or unaccomplised '..

The other business personalities were seeing the young and energetic and not to forget the sucessful business man MAAN SINGH KHURANA.. celebrating.. there were friends and foes both.. maan's best friend arjun came .. he tried to question him.. know the reason why maan was doing this.. first time in his life he is drunk and that too the reason no one knows'

Arjun came near maan and tried to ask him question him about his sudden starnge behaviour.. there was no pain or any feeling in his eyes but the rage and anguish that he was having can literally turn the person infront of him into ashes'.

Arjun: maan what's the reason why are you doing this.. just come with me' you are not in your right senses'.

Maan smirked giving a doubt on his behaviour to arjun.. arjun was sure something was not right'.

Arjun: are you listening to me maan'.

He was trying to wake the maan that was now actually superbly hidind the mask of ruthless maan singh khurana but maan he just snapped everything telling arjun to enjoy'.

Maan: arjun wont you enjoy on my success '.

He was fumbling with his steps .. anger seething in him' he looked at his business rivals enjoying with the girls of age half to them.. he felt utter disgust..and tried to remove his gaze when he heard a taunting comment coming towards himself'

Mr khadelwal.. a man in mid forties.. he was the biggest business rival of KC and maan specially'. He could never see anyone's growth and was much articular about his money and empire' not to forget he deals with all odd ways to succeed Khurana's but the man didn't knew the diamond that khurana's were having in the form of their son.. maan's takeover just in two years has lead the khurana empire to be counted among world's richest persons'

No need to say about his dedication towards his work or his way of proving and playing rivalry everything was unique' just like him'.

Mr khandelwal: so Mr khurana who is the dearest friend for whom you are celebrating' wont we get the pleasure of meeting your friend for whom especially you arranged everything.. must say maan you are having a spendid choice of everything'

Maan was hearing each and every comment while his eyes were fixed on the man who was shamelessly checking out one of the girls on the bar' his eyes were lustfully roaming around her curves just to snatch what she owns.. maan reverted his gaze and answerd him in a polite manner'

Maan : mr khandelwal my friend what she does.. and what does should not be in your concern or interest ' you should better concentrate on your works you are presently doing'

Here in the same hotel'

In the restraurent .. a girl was sitting.. she was beautiful , fair , with a glint of shyness and naughtiness in her eyes may be waiting for someone'.

She was so lost in her coffee and constantly checking the time ' when she received a note saying " MEET IN IN ROOM NO 405"

First she was confused but then received a message that confirmed that she was indeed called'.

" come right now geet waiting for you '."

Payal..

A small smile played on her lips ..

She was indeed very happy to meet her best friend after almost a year .. they had a small fight where she was not at all at fault.. by geet didn't backed herself when she approached to resolve their differences ' so she was here'..

Maan was fumbling and going towards his room.. he couldn't actually go back home that too drunk never..and had asked for a room'

He was on the reception ..and asked for his room'

When the receptionist gave him his key.. he was about to leave when a hotel staff asked him if he could help seeing his drunk state..

He escorted maan to lift when the next set of words made maan to know the actual motive of his help'.

Man: sir do you need any thing else'.

His eyes were filled with disgust and a dirty smile playing on his lips' he knew maan had understood that he was asking for a girl.. or say a S*** for him ' his mind was already freezed with hatred and remorse for her.. he could never forget that ayesha tried to cheat him and not only this she actually used his most sensitive tresured relation.. his friend who was no less than his sister arohi' and how can ayesha forget that maan can never forgive anyone who wil hurt arohi' he was always a protective brother since the time she had actually saved him and always feel indebted to her '..

Maan tried to forget his words but right now his frustation and anger is on its peek which is needed to be unleashed on someone and better be it's a payed girl who wont even open her mouth with the anger that will be unleashed on her'.

Maan entrusted a bundle of notes in his hands and asked him to sent her in his room'

Maan: send her in room no 405

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Edited by suhaaana - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
maan is going to the same room that of the girl who is geet
waiting for next
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shri12

maan is going to the same room that of the girl who is geet
waiting for next



yup u r right dear😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
maaneet going to be in same room
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thanksss😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
poor girl (geet)
circumstances ka shikar ho gayee
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Posted: 12 years ago


wow lovely update,, te way my maan enjoying his success and te way he is going to extreme was so lovely.. te way geet waiting for her friend and now she is prey to my maan, .. wat will happen now..i love te update so much dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
Maan is goin in the same room where geet is going
Continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Both r in same room... how..???? Super onion smiley 042

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