MG FF:A torn relation pt link to thraed 2 pg 1 - Page 2

Created

Last reply

Replies

855

Views

138624

Users

134

Likes

3177

Frequent Posters

sahibasharma thumbnail
Anniversary 12 Thumbnail Group Promotion 5 Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#11
nice concept...pls continue soon!!!!!!!
snehapriya thumbnail
Anniversary 11 Thumbnail Group Promotion 4 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#12
Wat happened dat made Maan to ask like dat.
Interesting. Continue soon.
.OneDirection. thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#13
interestng stryline ! do cont sn with ths ss . do pm me
suhana_maaneet thumbnail
Anniversary 12 Thumbnail Group Promotion 2 Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 11 years ago
#14
A TORN RELATION
~PART 1~

Geet , Geet handa an ordinary girl a shy timid girl with beauty at its peak she looks like that riped sweet fruit which though after its being ripened looks so unpure and babyish ... Geet was no less than that she is a girl with not much big and great dreams but there is always a wish , a wish to get the life partner whom she could rely upon... But life doesnt accomplish each and every dream what we transpire ...
Today was supposed to be a dream day for her but now the fear and pain she is having in her heart cant come out ... She was going to marry him today is the mehndi and haldi ceremony her sisters and friends teasing her ...

Friend : geet kiska naam likhen her friend asked to tease her and others too joined her... " haan haan geet batana kiska naam likhna hai..."

Geet was looking down her eyes downcasted seeming like a shy girl who weaves every new dream but she , she was the bride who was looking forward to face the dreadful reality of her life next day... The girls were giggling teasing her about her would about the man who will claim her mark her his , he will be her soulmate but what if this surrender become a dreadful nightmare , a wound which cant be cured then life becomes tough the tough phase in which we starts to get scared a dreadful truth becomes life her destiny...

geet came to her room she looked at herself she was glowing all were saying she will capture her prince's heart the moment he will see her his eyes will be at her admiring her but what about her no one asked her about the resentment that was in her life , the agony of being a voiled soul the moment that changed her ... No one asked her... Tears were like those long lost enemies that had found the way to enter her life... She was crying " rona aur aankho se girte ashko ko behne dena uski takdeer ban gai... Wo takleef zindagi ka nasoor baan jayega kabhi socha b na hoga...ek andekhi muskurahat aa gai un bejaan labon par sirf ye kehne ZINDAGI NE DAGA DIYA PAR EK DAGA ZINDAGI HI BAN GAYA KABHI NAHI SOCHA THA ..."   
She was sitting infront of the mirror her mother was making her wear the heavy costly jewellery the ones sent by him , what an irony fate is making her to loose herself to the one with whom she lost herself...


here is part 1 ...

do leave your comments😊
zariya123 thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#15
THIS IS CALLED A POINT TO START LOVE IT
DO CONTINUE
suhana_maaneet thumbnail
Anniversary 12 Thumbnail Group Promotion 2 Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 11 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: zariya123

THIS IS CALLED A POINT TO START LOVE IT
DO CONTINUE

thqq
zariya123 thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#17
THE PROLOGUE WAS FLASHBACK OR FUTURE TRACK ?
suhana_maaneet thumbnail
Anniversary 12 Thumbnail Group Promotion 2 Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 11 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: .bloom.


interestng stryline ! do cont sn with ths ss . do pm me

thqq fr pms dear add me
suhana_maaneet thumbnail
Anniversary 12 Thumbnail Group Promotion 2 Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 11 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: zariya123

THE PROLOGUE WAS FLASHBACK OR FUTURE TRACK ?

future it will b after some parts
suhana_maaneet thumbnail
Anniversary 12 Thumbnail Group Promotion 2 Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 11 years ago
#20