LAST CHAP SS:The Dreamland Developed,But...He!!

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Susmita

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Prateeti:
thanks dear fr liking it.😊

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ohh...m really happy dear Arpi to see u.⭐️

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suspense??...where's it dear???.😲...it's a vry vry short simple story.

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Arun

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Its good short and simple and i can read it :-) i will be following it up

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Paramita Ray

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Posted: 12 years ago

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😊Superb introduction and first chapter. But his minor injury???Why it pained him so much?? I find this thing little mysterious otherwise everything looked normal.
And Happy New Year.
So sorry re toke chintai rakhar jonyo.

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Susmita

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: mrmrfrevr
😊Superb introduction and first chapter. But his minor injury???Why it pained him so much?? I find this thing little mysterious otherwise everything looked normal.
And Happy New Year.
So sorry re toke chintai rakhar jonyo.

aa gayi Maharani...😆...are tor jonno to ami cocoahut o upd karte parchhi na......okk... now I'll upd asap...sab log blood-relation leke utabla ho raha hay😕

Arun:
thanks bro fr reading & liking.😊

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Susmita

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Posted: 12 years ago

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2nd Part

This is Not Urs...But My fault...Hued With Hidden Warmth

Evening

It's the darkest evening of the world...yes, Chandragupt's small world.
Chanakya & Chandragupt were squatting silently on the bank of river Jhilom. They were defeated in their 1st battle against Dhanand & had to escape from the battle-field in disguise.

Chandragupt had tears in his eyes...this right arm...this right arm engulfed all the dreams...how?? why???...he's still a child in his inner heart & couldn't bear any pain...may be it's due to his wounds, his defeats,his sentiment & so on...he's very emotional & softhearted...very careful & possessive too.

Suddenly he felt a loving touch on his shoulder. He immediately turned to Acharya & said in a crying voice-"I apologize Acharya...I-I heartily apologize...I was overconfident..."

Chanakya completed his incomplete words-"& that's why u didn't inform me about ur wound in right arm. Am I right??"

Chandragupt was speechless...Acharya knew everything!!!...HOW??!!!...His face fell out if shame.

"Listen Chandragupt,it's not a fact of shame to confess that u r in pain. For this-u'll never be addressed as an immature or coward. Understand??"

Chandragupt remained silent for a while...after a moment or 2 he stated slowly-"Actually Acharya,I-I thought I can manage that pain without much trouble...but I can't...I can't."

"It's natural. You've a broken bone in ur arm. I noticed that when you're facing trouble to carry a few weapons.You can't avoid me Chandragupt...you're not so adult yet...isn't??"-Chankya flushed with a ray of his rarest smile.

He stated again-"I'm the main villain."

Chandragupt couldn't understand how to react...what's that???

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Susmita

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Posted: 12 years ago

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this is 2nd last part...how's it???...I think it's not a long part-haan??

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Paramita Ray

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Bhanga dan hath...Samrat er sathe tar parajayer glanite amio saman dukhito ebom lojjito. Parajayer muhurte tar ja anubhuti ebom tar parer dikkar monobedona bodoi koshter...bhanga hather bedonar thekeo😭.
R ekbar khub bhalo hoyeche Sona👏 .Chaliye jaa👍🏼.

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Susmita

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: mrmrfrevr
Bhanga dan hath...Samrat er sathe tar parajayer glanite amio saman dukhito ebom lojjito. Parajayer muhurte tar ja anubhuti ebom tar parer dikkar monobedona bodoi koshter...bhanga hather bedonar thekeo😭.
R ekbar khub bhalo hoyeche Sona👏 .Chaliye jaa👍🏼.

ami feelings niyei likhte bhalobasi bhai...& ek jon 18 yr guy oi bhabe byatho hole bhenge to padbei...bt his Guiding Light knows how to soothe him...that's their relation...not overdoing, not much more expression-bt HEARTY BOND BEYOND BLOOD-RELATION.😊