Virman-ff-two left feet - part 18-ii - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
#41
SUPER STORY.WAITING FOR VIRMAN ROMANCE.THANKS FOR YOUR PM.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42
wow loved Virat .Just a friend (pati), he takes care of MAnvi so much.Wondering how much he will take care of her when they start loving each other.Loved Virat in this whole update .Thanks for the pm😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43
Fab update,,! Like the way ur taking up the story..slow n steady wins readers heart,,.,😊! Thnks for the pm!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
Read last two chapters togthr... Thanks for Pm and I knw m late... Sorry for dat... Awesome concept... m lovin it... Continue soon... Cant wait for next update... 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
Lovely update... Virat is so caring .. But he really treats Manvi like a kid.. he gave her a 30 min long lecture!! Poor Manvi.. at first fasting ke side effects and now she has to face shaadi ke side effects alsoπŸ˜†.. I hope they fall in love soon 😳.. But this Maya is so irritating.. total Chipku.. Please continue soon.. Thank you so much for the pm.. Take care 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
Awesome update!!
Loved it!!!
Your story has a different concept which makes it more enjoyable to read!!
Can't wait 4 ur next update!!
Thanks 4 the pm!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
awssm...update sooon n pls pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
it was awesome yar continue soon...πŸ‘
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
first of all thank u for a double update...
and this update was so swet n typical virmanish...
loved few of the dialogues like
 

"Another function? And why is Manvi fasting? Maar do ge kya bacchi ko? Pehle se hi itni kamzore hai? Uske upper fasting? Very good"

"Kamzore?? Kamzore hoge mere dushman..main koi kumzore vumzore nahi hoon. Please keep your valuable opinions to yourself" Manvi retorted angry.

"Ok suit yourself. One more day bunk. You will fail all your exams then you will understand. I am done. You ladies have fun. Bye"

Manvi slowly stirred into consciousness and she saw Virat sitting on the other side, reading something. "Main yaha behosh padi hui hu aur tumko kitabhon ki padi hai?"

"Partner, pehle toh main din main ek baar tumhare baat sun karke paak jati thi. Ab toh poori life mujhe yeh sab sunna padega?? Bahut dar lag raha hai."

"Mat suno na..rooj fasting karo..roj behoosh ho jao..college mat jao..gavaron ki tarah ghar main baiti raho..teek hai?" Virat got very upset and went to change. He came back and started studying ignoring her.

Manvi slowly went to him "Accha baba..nahi karungi phir se koi aaisa vrath aur kal se college bhi chali jaongi"

"Badi meherbani hai. Please abhi ja kar so jao" Virat joined her hands bowing to Manvi da great.

pls try n update soon...
dnt frgt to pm me... :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
A very lovely story and you did a great job, can not wait to read more.

Plz add me to your pm list πŸ˜Š