this was so cute... I loved it so so so much!! Rey kissing taani's pics was fav part.. Haye! Loved it.. But it was too small... Next update please bada dena!
Awww!! Kitna cute update tha.. this was not at all boring!! Loved the part where he searches for Taani's photos in swayam's phone.. loved the entire update.. update asap n pm me when u do!!
Hey guyz...iss part main bhi jyada taarey nai hai bt i promise ki nxt update main sirf taarey honge...
Sachhi mucchi jo lagta hai vo comment karo...
Precap- taani n rey miss each othr ... Cant sleep... Both r waiting fr d nxt day
Part 5
5am Boys tents
Rey gets up at 5 am though he slept only fr two hrs vo bhi mushkil se...he gts ready
S- gets up n finds rey dreaming n smiling (surprised) wipes his eyes...(shouts)
Reeey?????
R- abbey kya hua sharon sapne main bhi chiilllati hai kya???
S-vo chod teri subah 8 baje se pehle kab hone lagi haan????
R- jaabse teri behen se pyaar hua hai
S- kuch kaha kya tune???
R- haan jaabse tere jaise punctual aur up to date frndz mile hai ( jhootha kahin ka)
S- thnx thnx atleast tu sudhar gaya...bohot din ho gaye kisise jhagda bhi nai kiya...good change...( goes to get ready)
R- khud ko chane ke jhad pe chadha raha hai...ye change ki vajah toh tere weird behen n d love of my life taani hai...aur maine kalhi shivam ko peeeta hai...ufff taani...majnu se lekar ranjha aur ranjha se lekkar romeo tak sab kuch bana dala...i hope tum mujhe pagal nai banaogi...o god ye ms taani ke mst awaited darshan kab honge????[/ COLOR]
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Girls cottage
7.30 am
Taani ws still lying on d bed holding a pillow tightly( rey ko toh pakad nahi sakti aur teddy bhi ghar pai hai toh pillow sehi kaam chalana padega) .she is thinking bout rey n is tomato red...
Sharon cums out after taking bath n sees taani blushing
S- taani...(no response)...waves her hand in front...taani ( no response) (shakes hr n shouts) TAAANIII... .. (taani dar jaati hai...cums out of hr trance wid a thud ...d pillow in hr hand flies n hits simmi who is busy thinking bout nil)
Si- kya...kya hua?????
Sh- lo jaag gayee humari sleeping beauties ...no no ...im.sry...i.mean humari dreaming beauties...
Si- (blushes) vo main dekh ke aati hoon rinni kaha reh gayee(runs away)
T-kya hua...earthquake aa gaya kya...
S- nai nai koi toh aapne dreamland se jag gaya...
T-bhabhi...(blushes)
S- wat bhabhi...nw stop blushing...have u seen d time...aapne daily routine se kaafi late haan...kya hua...nw dont say ki kuch nai...i no kuch toh hua hai...
T- yup...bhabhi ...bohot kuch hua hai...jst...its a bit...
S- its ok take ur time...lekin aab ye day dreaming chodo n n get ready warna late ho jayenge...(hands her a coffee mug)
T- kk il get ready...
[COLOR=magenta]Every one gets ready to go fr d breakfast...
Both girls n boys cum out @ d dame time bt dey dont c each other ...par rey ki najare toh taani ko itni shiddat se dhund rahi thi ki puri kayanat uski help kar rahi thi...uske haath me joh papers the vo nneche gir gaye n vo utha kar upar uth raha tha tab he saw d beautiful lady in frnt of his eyes...he got up n kept on staring at her...mesmerised by hr beauty...her flying hair...her bak bak...d hands she ws moving constantly while telling sumthing to sharon...d way she ws teasing simmi jst like a small kid...
Bt he ws disturbed by swayam S- rey wat happen chal na
r- haan dude ...vo mera cell reh gaya hai main vo lekar aata hoon...
S- kk jaldi aaa
Girls n boys cum @ d common enterance
Sh-cum on gals lets get d forms...
@ d same time
Sw- cum on boys lets get d forms...
(dey both realise n c each oth n der is a LLHH Boys do their chem n gals cough)
Sw(changes d topic)...hey chalte hai phir aapne apne categories mein report karna hey
Every one- haan haan chalo
Sh( gives swayam a thnk u look) (everyone walks...taani is besides sharon)
T- (pokes sharon)...do dil mill rahe hai magar chupke chupke...
S- shut up taani...
T- kk sry( ye rey kaha reh gayee)
S-taani ruk kyun gayee... Chalo na
T- voo...bhabi i forgot my id card ill jst get it
S- kk par jaldi aana
Taani starts searching fr rey (rey jaan bujh ke hide kar raha ...he smiled cing taani so desperate to meet him)
T- call karti hoon...nai pehle ill search a bit more...
Rey sneaks behind hr taps her shoulder
R- kise dhoondh rahi ho
T- rey ko...aapne unko kahi dekha hai kya????
R- tumhare peeche hai. .. (taani turns n looks at him n ders a Llhh)
T- vo...rey...aap
R- haan main...kyun mujhe hi dhoond rahi thi na tum???? Mai he hoon rey
T- nai...
R- kya nai...mera chehra badal gaya kya( touches his face all over)
T- nai...nai toh
R- kya nai nahi kar rahi ho...nw tell me mujhe dhoond kyun rahi thi?!???
T-vo...vo...
R- pehle nai nai n abb vo vo...words reapeat jarne ki beemaari lag gayee kya?????
T-nai...
R-taani...phirse
T- nai...vooo
R- TAaani
T- kk...sry
R- k vo chodo...nw will u tell me y u were searching fr me...are haan vo tume sawalon ke jawab complete karne the na...im sry i 4 got...so hurry up
T- kya.. Vo actualky maine socha hi nahi toh main abb apna form collect karke sochke aapko bata doongi...bye
R- arey aise kyun non stop train ki tarah baat kar rahi ho????? (she runs away saying bye)
R- are ruko...taani ...taani Hmmm kab tak bhagogi ms taani shekhawat...ek na ek din mujhse phir se i love u toh kehna hi padeg N i promise aaj main tumse bulva ke rahhonnga ki u still love me...par kaise ek toh iss camp main koi na koi toh beech mwin jaaror tapak jayega aur ye gang bhi tih humesha detectivegiri karte rehte hai...mujhe usko yaha se bahar le jaana hoga...kuch soch rey got 2 do sumthing...
Precap-
T- rey hum debate baad main khelte hai pehle uss gole waale ko pls rokiye...are dekh kya rahe hai...doudna nahi aata kya...go run
R- oye hello request kar rahi ho ya order jhad rahi ho????
T-(shouts)...REeeY
R- kk chiillao mat jaa raha hoon meri maa...
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NT SENT PMs...ill send dem after i update my another ff tonight...i hope u all liked it...pls comment...COLOR]Edited by Veereyi - 11 years ago
Swayam shouting Rey name was hilarious lol I taught something is wrong with him and lover boy cant sleep only dreaming about his Taani hmm. U did a awesome job plz continue soon
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