OS Series - Vignettes - Part 5. Ahem! - Page 2

ahaha poor Akash needs to learn so much in this situation...

  

I loved all the OSs of this series- all the 5, I like you style, lot of banter between the couple, subtle romance, dialogues which lets the reader imagine rather than describing it deeply- Totally loved it!

Poor Akash!

at least our akash bhai got some importance in your OS, it was really good. Really revisiting all those beautiful moments with IPK.

LOL!!! This was awesome!!! Made me crack up!!!

Nicely done!!

very nicely written! yes off the beat but loved reading it👍🏼!

awww
poor AKASH
he needs to take lessons from brother for lot of things!!
i have sent you a buddy request
please accept it and PM the future updates

👍🏼  Quite something...REFRESHING really!! never read anything frm Akash'a POV...very good...and the SPIRT made u write it..AHEM!! 😉

aww poor akash
dude you need some of that arrogance that your brother has
you make it too easy for them to tease you
arrey kuch kariye bhai warna rm waasi aapko apni patni ke saath romance karne ka mauka bhi naa de