Arhi: Desert Rose #4 Epilogue Pg 43 - Page 44

Such a beautiful ff...so descriptive so amazing and so wonderful..

Happy new year...

hey friend😊

wow This was one hell of an FF just beautiful.Love ur unique style of writing which never ceases to amaze me.Ur ability to explain things so beautifully and in detail is exquisite.Loved this whole concept of khushi being the more sensible one taking care of whatever was left of her beautiful family, her determination to bring happiness into her jiji's life, her do or die attitude, her infatuation towards Arnav, her boldness her feisty nature, her love, her simplicity to name a few. I still can't digest the fact of an immature Payal though I love her...!!! Loved the immature Akaash who in time has learnt to be more responsible in life. Anju loved her to the core, her love, devotion, chirpiness, friendship, ability to love unconditionally, welcome and accept people graciously with love and a lot more. Manav loved him to say the least true love koi isse sike. And Arnav, to witness the arrogant, angry young and not to mention sinfully handsome man who doesn't believe in Love, marriage, trust change for the better due to khushi and her unwavering love, truly she is his salvation was just beautiful.And Shyam he always has to try and ruin arnav doesn't he? he went to the extent of killing his parents to get to his property and poor depressed lavz to get back at him and his lust...!!!😡 Loved how the story always bordered on a mystery. Loved the way the story unraveled it was amazing. It's hard to let go of the story once you start reading it. Its addictive...!!! Loved how U describe the places like U do, like u have been living for ages in those places. Loved how U gave Arnav and Khushi time to enjoy their life the way they did before they start a family of their own.Honeymoon in Europe was the best...!! And loved the beautiful and apt ending for this wonderful brainchild of urs...!!!Hope to read more from ur side. Actually u may find me guilty of being a silent reader of ur first FF and was scared to comment but can't deny the fact that I loved every single thing about tht one very very much. But thanks to U as urs was the first FF I read on this forum and through it was introduced to a world of wonderful and talented writers and Arshi...!!!😃
Tons of Love❤️,
Anjali...!!😃
PS : A VERY VERY HAPPY NEW YEAR AND HOPE U AND UR LOVED ONES HAVE AN AWESOME YEAR AHEAD...!!

Originally posted by: lazyleaves

I started reading this FF around 3.30 am (IST) and left it only after 8 am i.e. after I was done reading all the chapters.


I had decided to read the first few chapters before I go to sleep. But you my dear lady and your work didn't let me sleep or even made me feel sleepy. I was hooked from the very first chapter.


The story and your command over the language is commendable. I went all dhak dhaking reading Arnav's description in the gym.


The way you had styled Khushi was so different and refreshing to read right from her school teacher avatar to her Raizada Bahu get up.


There are innumerable things that I liked about this FF. I will just name a few here:

1. The Rajasthani backdrop - either you have been there often or you have researched a lot about it. You actually transported me to those scorching deserts where this love was blooming. Your sense of description is excellent :)

2. The characterization - the characters were very well sketched. I liked the fact that despite being uber rich, Anjali never looked down upon the two sisters. At first I was pretty angry at Akash but as things unfolded and when I discovered that he had told everything about Payal to Anjali, I finally liked him :) Your Arnav is too sexy...ekdum hot :D Khushi is feisty and I loved her character. She is burdened with responsibilities but if given an opportunity to enjoy life, she does. Obviously both were blind and idiots to not see the love between them in each others eyes...But hey ek MU toh banta hai boss :D Shyam is pure evil here. He has been plotting and trying very hard but at the end truth and goodness always prevails.

3. You write mature scenes pretty well :) Dhak dhak dhak dhak


4. The twists and turns, revelations in bits and pieces, the surprises, the shocks, the dialogues, the emotions were portrayed in a perfect mixture.


5. You have an art to enchant and captivate your readers.


6. The name and significance of the FF title - This FF has a very unique name and the significance later revealed in the story made my heart flutter.


There were many more tiny aspects that I loved while reading them like hating Gunam, that khatara scooty, that ArHi outing, etc. but can't seem to remember all now :P Sorry :P


The only thing that upset me was this story is not very known and I feel really bad when something as wonderful as your work doesn't get the recognition it deserves. I will forward the link of your FF soon to my readers :)


And of course you gave us a very happy and perfect ending to this beautiful story. Clearly this is one of the best stories on the forum and when I say this let me tell you that I have read a lot of FFs and yours would easily be in the top three 😃


Applause-worthy work 👏


Thank you for sharing this story with us


- Zehra :)

Kavi - I hope your creative juices are still flowing because the epilogue just left me wanting more and more! Happy new year! Hope 2013 is filled with joy, prosperity, good health and love!

This is a beautiful royal story. It was oozing royalty all the way. The way you described the haveli, the green house and the whole of Rajasthan left me speechless..hell..even the way you described Arnav's tie in one of the updates had me imagining how he would be looking in that grey suit.

Great... I read it in one go... Excellent writing style...

just came across your ff and must applaud you for the masterpiece that you have created...this story was mindblowing ...loved it to the core...i am jus so happy i read this was awake 2 nights just with an intention to complete it n m happy i did...u r a brilliant writer ...just keepwriting yaar😊

hey, finally finished with desert rose...i have been reading your both ff's for the last three days madly...i luved each and every word in it...😊 u r truly an awesome writer...its just wow...👏