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Posted: 11 years ago
amazing update
cont soon
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hi priya i am new reader of your ff

and i am happy to tell you that i read your full ff in one go in two days

and i must tell you that you are a amazing  amazing amazing writer

your ff is janleva priya

every part has a suspence so i exicted for each part and thay all are amazing, fabulous , fantastic, awesome, outstanding no more words to appreciate i am speechless

grate work priya

and pls cn soon
and tnx for pm

and pm me

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: devildiva21

superb update..!!!!

lvd mehak n riya teasing rathore about seema.!!!😉
awww rathore n mehak trying to make riya busy..!!
lvd d way they woke rathore..!!!! n poor rathore had to watch salman mvie..!!!😆
feeling bad fr riya..!!!😭 that rohan na..!!!😡🤢
she is scared of her birthday..!!!
hope arjun makes her normal n happy again..!!!
cant wait fr d nxt part..!!!
update soon..!!!

Thank u so much deva dr for likingg..n commentinggg ...!!
hehhhee realy yr poor rathor..but usane movie to dekhi he nahi vo to so gaya tha...hehhheee...
dont warry dr very soon every think gona be alright..!!
thanks dr ..i like to read ur comment..!!
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Originally posted by: yas23

amazing update
cont soon

Thanks dr
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[QUOTE=12pr]
<font face="Georgia, 'Times New Roman', Times, serif"><font color="#0000FF">hi priya i am new reader of your and i am happy to tell you that i read your full ff in one go in two day and i must tell you that you are a amazing amazingamazingwriter</font></font>

<font face="Georgia, 'Times New Roman', Times, serif"><font color="#0000FF">your ff is janleva priya</font></font>

<font face="Georgia, 'Times New Roman', Times, serif"><font color="#0000FF">every part has a suspence so i exicted for each part and thay all are amazing,fabulous,fantastic,awesome,outstandingno more words toappreciatei amspeechless</font></font>

<font face="Georgia, 'Times New Roman', Times, serif"><font color="#0000FF">gratework priya</font></font>

<font face="Georgia, 'Times New Roman', Times, serif"><font color="#0000FF">and pls cn soon</font></font>
[DIV][B][I]<font face="Georgia, 'Times New Roman', Times, serif"><font color="#0000FF">and tnx for pm
Omggg speechless hone ke baad bhi etni tarifff ...
thank u so much dr...!!!
do din main tumne sara ff pad liya...impressive yr...
i m realy happy yr..sure dr i will pm u n thanks u again
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Thank u so much fr for liking n commentig ...i m realy happy after reading ur comments ..!!
i kno u all r litle confuse ...
sonch rahi the aap sab ke cofusion or ye sad track khatm ker duin...plz forgive me if i m not able to ur expectation...!!
hoppp u like next part..that why arjun marry to rosh..but its only one side..abhi to bahut kuch hidden haii..but sorry fr usake bare main. baad main. bataongi...!! plz plz plz is arjun do right to marry roshani..plz jaror batana...!!
or arjun. ka riya per chilana kya vo sahi tha ya nai..????
i m waiting for ur ans..?? n also for ur Qqq

i kno i kno story track thoda sad chal raha hai..
vo kya hai..kabhi kushi kabhi gam..
very soon. u all meet a new life of ariya ...

if anyone wants pm plz send budy request...
SAMJHE YA SAMJHAYON...
Plz dont forget to hit like butten n leav ur valuable comment..its help me to write next part...thank u so much my dr fr...a biggg biggg hug ..
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**CHAPTER-23**
"kyun tera dard"


SCENCE-ARJUN N RATHOR CONVERSATION CONTI ON TARRIES-
A-no sammeer its all bez of me..why why ..why i do this..arjun cursed himself all happened bez of him..if i not celebrate his birthday..nothing gona happened to her..
main to use surprise dena chahta tha uske chehare per khushi lana chahta tha..
per maine..maine uske liye or bhi mushkil ker de..
maine uske pain ko or bada diya..i swe sam if i kno..anythink about this..main ehsa nahi kerta..
sameer comes near to arjun rested his hand on arjun sholder ..arjun plz compose urself..
how sam how i composed myself..smile dekhana chahta tha uske chehare par..per main to..nafrat hai mujhe nafrat..i hate my self ..i hate myself..
arjun..!!! plz sambhalo apne aap ko..ager tum ehsa karoge to riya ko kon sambhalega ...she needs u arjun..she needs ur lv n care..
usne kabhi kaha nahi but i kno..vo bahut akeli hai arjun..mujhe laga etne salon main sab thik ho gaya ..but i was wrong..yes i was wrong..
use tumhare pyar tumhare sath ke jarorat hai..
yes u right sam ..arjun composed himself..its not to late sam..main use pehale vali riya bana ker rahunga..
Ra-per arjun meri ek baat samajh nahi aye..ager tum riya se etana pyar kerte they ..then why u marry with roshani..tumne ek baar bhi riya ka sach janne ke koshish nahi ke..i meen..
A-i understand sam what u wanna to ask..
u kno main rosh or riya we trio r best fr..
when riya left me alone..
i was completly brockdown..
mujhe kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha main kya karo..
mari life ek pal main change ho gaye..mara pyar meri life..jo mere jine ke vajaha..es tarah achank..mujhe chud ker chali gaye..meri kuch samajh nahi aya msin kya karon..
i hv no idea ke roshani bhi mujhase pyar kerti hai..mujhe es bare main tab pata chala jab riya mujhe chud ke
Edited by Piyarani - 11 years ago
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Ker gaye tab bus ek roshani he the jisane mujhe sambhala..maine use hamesha apna ek achha dost samjha..per i hv kno idea that she lv me..six month ho gaye they riya ko mujhe chud ker gaye..
main he janta huin ye six month maine kaise gujare hai,ek din roshani ne mujhase kaha ke vo mujhase pyar kerti hai or mujhase shadi kerna chahati hai..
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Ros-arjun esmain galat kya hai..main tumse pyar kerti huin or tumse shadi kerna chahati huin..
Ar-how dare u rosh..tumhari himmat kaise huye mujhe yesab kehane ke..u very well kno that i lv riya ..or uske baad bhi..
Ros-i kno that u lv riya..but vo tumse pyar nahi kerti
Ar-roshani!!! (arjun yelled on rosh) vo mujhase pyar kerti hai ya nahi esase tumhen koe matlab nahi..
Ros-matlab hai arjun ..ager vo tumhen chud ker tumhen dhoka deker chali gaye to esmain meri kya galti hai..vo kabhi tumhare pyar ke layak(able) he nahi the..even use jaise ladkiya to kise ke..befor she comleted her semtence..arjun giv one
one tight slap..tumhari himmat kaise huye meri riya ke bare main ye sab kehane ke..beshak vo mujhe chud ker chali gaye..beshak vo mujhse pyar nahi kerti..lekin eska matlab ye nahi ke main. usake khilaf ek shabd bhi nahi sun sakta..samjhe tum..
jaror mujhe main he koe kami hogi, jaror mai he usake pyar ke kabil nahi tha..tear comes out his eyes..after remembering her..
Ros-main ja rahi huin arjun..per but the difference bw u n riya..
riya ne tumhen chud diya or tumne mujhe..esmain meri kya galti hai..ke tumhara pyar adhura reh gaha..or mera bhi..she left his house after saying this...
but her word..every time shouted his ears..
Ar-yes she is right..esmain uski kya galti..aaj phir maine apni ek dost kho de..kyun god kyun mere sath he ehsa hota hai..jo mere dil ke pass hota hai vo mujhe chud ker chala jata hai




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Present talk-
Usake jane ke kuch dino baad achank ek din mujhe uska call aya..vo mujhse milana chahati the..jab mai usase milane gaya to maine dekha ke..
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Ar-Roshani tum yaha or vo bhi en kapdo mai..
Ros-plz arjun try to understand me ..maine bahut koshish ke tumhen bhulane ke ,or apni life main age badne ke..ir shayad vohi main ker rahi the..per main us ladke se shadi nahi ker sakti..main sirf tumse pyar karti huin..main apni shadi se bhag ker aye huin..
Ar-what tum ye kya keh rahi ho..
Ros-yehi sach hai arjun..main usase shadi ker leti per vo ladka..i hv no idea ke vo pehale se he shadi shuda hai..
Ar-what ..?already married..ager vo pehale he married hai to tumhare parents ne tumhari marrige uske sath kaise fix ker de..tum mere sath chalo main. tumhare parents se baat kerta huin..
Ros-No arjun main nahi jaongi..tum nahi jante mere parents ko..main mer jaongi per main vapis nahi jaongi..
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so i hv no other choise finaly i marry her or phir hum mombai shift ho gaye..
Sam-sameer listning all this very carefully as he thinking somthing in mind..n ask tumne ek baar bhi us ladke or roshani ke parents se baat kerne ke koshish nahi ke
Ar-nahi vo roshani kaphi dari huye the..usne mujhe uske patents se baat kerne se mana kiya tha ..so maine kabhi unse baat he nahi ke..or shadi ke baad usane ek baar bhi apne parents se contact nahi kiya..or na he mujhe kerne diya..
Sam-tumhen sach main lagta hai kise ladke ke parents apni daughter ke sath ehsa karenge..
Ar-tum kehana kya chahate ho sam..
Arjun confuse by sameer statment..
vo ye arjun ke vo ladka jisase ros...before sameer culd say his phon ring..he saw the caller id n without waisting time imediatly picked his phon..
"it was mahak..or vo riya ke room se bol rahi the."
haan mahak..what..??? realy
ok hum abhi aa rahe hai..