Fate-Mate Thread 6 Chapter 34 - Page 108

I think it has so long since you updated.. Hope things are good..

Originally posted by: blablabla_mo7

I think it has so long since you updated.. Hope things are good..

read ol parts in one go 

HEY DEAR I AM MARRIE I JUST READ UR WHOLE STORY AND AM SHOCKED THAT I CANT GET IT OUT OF MY MIND I MEAN ITS JUST SMIPILY AMAZING I AM IN LOVE WITH IT NOW...WHEN I READ IT I FELT AS IF I AM IN ANOTHER  Edited by mariumsaeed786 - 11 years ago

hey
its the most bful story i ever came across! :)

heyaaa where r uh????? me missing uh. i hope everything's f9? .plsss update asap.. please.

omg!!!tht was an awesum treat!!!u really really really r an  awesum wryter...

somebody from this forum  told me to read ur Fate-Mate..I am really please and thankful to her...whoever u are love u for that🤗...

came across ur ff and finished it...and enjoyed the concept and the story...😊 I noticed one thing ...as hum apke hain kaun was the ever biggest film without having intimate scenes...same is the case with ur FF...and its quite a broad hint for those writers on this forum, who went into sexual details in every update...and it feels more pathetic, when u see that they can't even write a simple English sentence without serious grammar errors... and U just curse urself for even giving them a try...cz its not the sexual details but the concept, the build up, the depth, the meaningful dialogues, the choice of words: these r the things , which r so important...(and I admit there are writers, who use such details but v skilfully, subtly only to enhance the build up and they possess such mastery over choice of words that u never feel disgusted...a passing remark 😉)

You just can't imagine the effect of your writing on me.. you are such a delightful writer.. Explaining every little thing in detail.. making us feel what you feel.. with out getting carried away... n with out letting us carried away binding us to your writings... you are awesome...