ArHi FF: A Dark Love Story...UPD P.127+LINK P.136 - Page 54

Originally posted by: rush007

I can't tell u how eagerly i keep waiting for ur updates oh god, I can see that member are eager to know how I'll unfold the story. This FF shows the darkest ASR any writer has written and u r justifying his character Haye haye, thanku ji😳😳 I feel bad for kushi and payal, But i know after some time ASR will change for his love sake In the end of the story he'll change for sure...but it'll take time, too much time. Got angry on aakash how the hel can he hit his wife. will give some extra detail on them asap U have kept the story lively, exciting, mysterious from the beginning till now. Plz keep updating ur story to us with same passion. THANKS from the bottom of the heart for such a nice comment ji.. Thanks mention not ji😳😃 

Originally posted by: ramyarn

As usual the chapter was interesting. thanks ji So Kushi agreed for a forceful marriage . I mean y can't she just say No to the priest. Khushi made a choice between live or not. she decided to marry him in order one day to be able to run away and then expose him 😉This is interesting. Now I am eager to know the developments bw the couples. I think Arnav is actually a softhearted person with Devils mask. hahaha, for ASR soft side...u'll wait for a couple of chappy n then something will happen😛 Felt sad for Payal.

Originally posted by: FairyAngel12

Akash must be devil yaar. I told na Akash is devil while Arnie is an angel BUT soon this won't be true😛😆😆 And OMG what khushi have done,spit on arnavs face.
wow awesome update thanks ji for liking it and will continue soon😉.Looking forward to the next update :)

Time for Q&H

1- I'm very very happy that you're liking the plot and mostly the 2 characters (Khushi and ASR).

This is FF is a challenge also for me because I'm writing about feeling on which I have never written before such as hate, pain, violence, desolation ecc...Thanks for your comment and support so far.

2- I know that you're waiting that love between Arhi blossom BUT it won't happen very soon ji.

Because as I said on 1st page

hate, pain, desolation, suffering, possesion, violence, obsession, blood, action and bullets.

I've written mostly on all these feelings/action/emotion

BUT

this is nothing compared to what will happen now that they're a couple.

😈😈😈My evil mind is working on full😈

 

3-

PROMO

 

I looked at him, he had bright eyes, but they hadn't lost their charm, even if he was drunk.
He handed me a look full of desire and I wasn't surprised at all when I felt his hands resting on my shoulder.
But that I did not stop my body to tense up.

 

See you tomorrow people

 

lovely post buddy👏

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