ArHi OS: Take Me Now! *Updated*

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soaringskies

@soaringskies

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#71

aweee- it was nice...😃😃😃

when r u updating solace...?

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-Grace-

@-Grace-

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#72

LOVEEEDDD ITTT!!!!

and the incorporation of SEZ dialogues did seem familiar lol

it was a beautiful story so glad Khushi realized she had made his life hell lmao

feel extremely sorry for Arnav...bechara!

i wished there was some more conversation after he woke up lol but its still a good shot:)

thanks for the PM<3

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SanzBarbie

@SanzBarbie

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#73

good 1. Brat khushi and chivalrous Arnav was refreshing to read.

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729619

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#74

Nice one. Loved the way you phrased Khushi as the more dominant one one. I could feel Arnav's Love.

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Mariam Khan

@Mxk3444

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#75

I love Sher E Zaat!!!! Wonderful story!!!

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sj_arhi

@sj_arhi

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#76

He fulfilled all her demands without a second thought, silently bore the pain of watching his beloved in another man's arms to see her smile, accepted rejection when he tried to reason with her on his love being superior and yet welcomed her with open arms when she finally realised their love.

She placed her demands before him, preferred to live in her bubble where she mattered the most, expected him in front of her at the time of need. After marriage she finally realised her selfishness as against his unconditional love; but even then demanded what she felt he required rather than placing the options before him. Beautifully written.

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Nisha

@Nichuss

Elite

+ 33

Posted: 12 years ago

#77

The realisation of love is explained

beautifully...

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..SankiMedhz..

@..SankiMedhz..

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#78

This was a really cute OS!!

A story of how friendship slowly evolved into love without either one of them realizing it...and then followed by denial when confronted about their real feelings... to acceptance finally!!!😳

I loved the way both of them confessed their feelings only by irking the green eyed monster of jealousy!!😆

Awww...Khushi...give Arnav all your love dear!! He deserves it!! He's been such a sweetie-pie throughout the time he has known you!!! He's done everything you have asked him to, and everything you haven't asked him to do too!! Realize your selfishness and now become selfless for Arnav!!

No fair...why did you end it there???😲 I want more dammit!!! I want to see how she changes herself to make Arnav happy and become a woman worthy of Arnav.

Beautifully written.

Thanks for the pm!!🤗