SS : CAPTIVE SPIRITS UPDATED ON PG 36- PART 9*aniversary special* - Page 8

Originally posted by: shria

nafi scary update   awww poor baby😆madhu was snoring 😲 😆 🤣
nafi that night scene was really scary i actually got scared  thats good then😉
i read it in night only ufff so aur dar lag raha hai 🥱 acha he humesha raat ko hi parna😆 thnk god im sleeping with my mom 😆 good fr health🤣
chand & arnav friends 😲 nafi from next update it shuld be less scary 😡   😡  no sorry cant do that😛😆cozz im a big darpok 😆  i know it😆
continu soon 😳

Originally posted by: spn-abhay

Awesum update nafi.n some bits were scary too.is dat ghost metz?n wat about abhay? Cntinue soon
w8ing 4 mystery to unfold

Originally posted by: Monami_50

Very nice.Does that hand print belong to Metz the bhootni?When will hottie become active?Continue soon

Originally posted by: -juhi-lily-

nafi 😡 agli bar se kam darana😡 oh man i was sweating so badly...!!! btw nice update😳

Originally posted by: SheDevil

hey awesome update ab jaldi sab reveal kar.I guess the spirit is of the gal who was killed in beginning of OS.May b Abhay used 2 love tht gal & somebody else or may b abhay killed her out of his senses

Originally posted by: .rumki.

awesome update
interesting story thanks😉
who was there? was it Metz? how Abhay lost his memory? u will get ur answers soon😃
enjoyed reading it. I like horror stories😃. Usually I don't get scared reading horror stories but reading this one I got scared😆 hmm good😆

Originally posted by: smdosi

Phew that was quite scary for sum1 as weak-hearted as me!!!! Btw thnx 4d pm..

Originally posted by: trishnawaliya

wow do bichade purane doste mile gaye mujhe lagta hai this house earlier belong to raichands... oopr a mysterious house nice...

Originally posted by: koli97

wahooo lovely😊continue asap😊

Originally posted by: harinisriram39

Naf, Naf, Oh my dear Naf, I simply loved it.  Horror genre is one of my favourites and my, you do write very well.  But it just looks like a beginning of some mystery and you mentioned this as an OS.  Do you have many chapters. i guesss...no no not much😛😆 Then I am warning you to update fast.  I can't tolerate suspenses. ha baba i am going to update tomorrow😆

Ram Singh here too 😆.  You don't want to separate Ram Singh and Madhu. Lol. Kyon yaar bechare ko yahan toh chod do Madhu ki taunting se.  And you made him Ramu Kaka.  Good that you have his wife also here. Warna kab tak Madhu ki hi taane sunta rahega🤣uff harry u r too much😆

 

Arnab and Chand friends here 🤣.i know its all fr drish😛  But I do like it for a change. yeah ofcourse its a great change😆

Bechare Abhay ko aakhir kya hua. u will know soon😉 Apni momma ko kab tak pareshan karta rahega?when did he do pareshan to mummi??😕😆

 

Jaldi continue.surree😉