SS : CAPTIVE SPIRITS UPDATED ON PG 36- PART 9*aniversary special* - Page 7

wow do bichade purane doste mile gaye mujhe lagta hai this house earlier belong to raichands... oopr a mysterious house nice...

wahooo lovely😊continue asap😊

uff...i just decided last nyte not to afraid...ghost jesa kuch nahi hota and all that...but aftet then i read ur update...oh god ...its to scary...aab me apne hostel ke room se kabhi bhi raat me bahar nahi nikalne wali hu... ...
btw story is superb,lovely,amazing,fantastic...😛 😛
i just feel all happaning front of my eye...superb yaar...
pls continue...thanks for the pm... 😛Edited by Nany - 11 years ago

Naf, Naf, Oh my dear Naf, I simply loved it.  Horror genre is one of my favourites and my, you do write very well.  But it just looks like a beginning of some mystery and you mentioned this as an OS.  Do you have many chapters.  Then I am warning you to update fast.  I can't tolerate suspenses.

Ram Singh here too 😆.  You don't want to separate Ram Singh and Madhu. Lol. Kyon yaar bechare ko yahan toh chod do Madhu ki taunting se.  And you made him Ramu Kaka.  Good that you have his wife also here. Warna kab tak Madhu ki hi taane sunta rahega

 

Arnab and Chand friends here 🤣.  But I do like it for a change. 

Bechare Abhay ko aakhir kya hua.  Apni momma ko kab tak pareshan karta rahega?

 

Jaldi continue.

 

comment updated at pg 8. 🤗

lovely and awsome update flora...👏

continue soon...

thanx for pm!🤗

Awesome update!
Mystery is increasing day by day here! Why Abhay lost his memory?
So chand n Arnab r friends!
Continue soon.

nafi u forced me to read an incomplete story..😡

Originally posted by: abhiya_kapi

Res.
I'll read and then comment. 👍🏼

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I'm surprised nafs this part is written by you. 😲 yes its written by me😆
You are a great horror writer. thank you Do u have any idea you hooked me till end of this update.
Your description about Piya's fear was awesome. I felt as if I was present with Piya when she was stammering, getting scared of glowing and flickered bulb.
wow thats great means i am sucessful making it horror🤣
So its a girl's hand mark. hmm is it Maithli? 🤢 wait and read ahead 😉😆

Oh finally chand and Arnab face-to-face. yeap😊

Lovely update nafs. I simply enjoyed this part. Thanks 4 PM and do update soon. 😃 will try to update soon

Originally posted by: Rmuk

Awesome awesome awesome update nafi!!!  thanks🤗
Oh god simply beautifully written.
Wow tnat was hell of a scary one. I was hell scared while reading the whole thing specially thay night scene was o god most scary one. 😆but i wasnt strange🤔😆
U described each and everything beautifully.
I loved the way u created mystery and included this scary effect so well.
I wonder what had happened to abhay, I am sure he has some connection with all this mystery. yes he has fr sure😊
I am eagerly waiting to know whose ghost was that.
lol chand anf arnab are frnds here good, I am waiting for abhiya meeting, I mean officially, good one.
Next time I want u to make it more scary ;) sure will try too😉
I would love to get scared like this rofl 🤣good
lol just joking, once more amazing, superb, brilliant, awesome job yaar!!!
I am loving this ss completely, plz continue soon, gr8 job!!!!