Ariya SS: Madno Re!! (Chap 3-Pg.8) 14/9 - Page 2

superb and emotional update
Beautifully shows riya's feeling
Thanx 4 d pm n update soon 😊

You have to continue!
Its brilliant!

that was very heartbreaking dear😭

awesome dear.. waiting for next part.. pm me...

Continue continue continue. I am sounding like a Despo but plzzz continue!

lovely os

Brilliant work dear!
You've potrayed Riya's emotions very well.
Cntnu on please.

Vry Nyc..

awww that was painful..:-( my doll...i always knew that n yes ur rite this will happen in the show also...riya is gonna be left alone...:-(
plz continue this as an FF or at least SS...would love to know what happens next...arjun leaves or not?? if yes how will ariya meet again...so many questions..:-D

Seriously Amazing!!  probably this is what will happen at the end coz no one has said that Riya and Arjun will get together in the show! But i would love it  if they get together!

the way you portrayed the emotions was very beautiful!