FF - The Mistake#1-Chapter Five *COMPLETED* - Page 41

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Posted: 11 years ago

Res ..

Yaya!! Guys I'm loving this..
Khushi throwing up on arnav .. ewww.. if I was him.. I would have thrown up too..
Nk knows arnav...and hayee the ending.. naughty khushi..
Need to know what happened.. go on jess!!! Edited by .._sonii_.. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Rafa!!! It was amazing...

Why the hell did you stop there!!! Damn I wanted you to write the whole scene😉

So Arnav already knows NK... that changes things

Jess not you have to complete where Rafa left us😆

I'm loving it

It's so fun writing a story like this😃

great job dear
Edited by SamiyaIPKKND - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

I loved the chapter :) 

The starting part about Akash, NK and Arnav was a great twist...NK knowing Arnav... Now Kushi doesn't know it... OMG what if she tells him something about Arnav ?? Its going to be interesting !!

I loved  the switch between the past and present...it was Amazing...

Great update :)

Jess...update soon !! :)
Edited by asrcraze - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 3 seems not continue with first 2 parts, isn't it
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Posted: 11 years ago
res

that was funny and different...awesome
Edited by tanvia - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
AWESOMNESSS PESONIFIED!

xD
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: SamiyaIPKKND

Rafa!!! It was amazing...


Why the hell did you stop there!!! Damn I wanted you to write the whole scene😉

So Arnav already knows NK... that changes things

Jess not you have to complete where Rafa left us😆

I'm loving it

It's so fun writing a story like this😃

great job dear


Thought it'd be an interesting dynamic if it turns out Khushi is friends with Arnav's cousin. Fun for whoever writes the next bit. 😆
Edited by arisai - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
No one tells me beforehand about this resing business!

RES! 
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Posted: 11 years ago
Res-
Wow another new updates!
& its fabulous like the other 2 updates👏 Edited by coronapsyche - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
woho an other new story loved it plz update soon!!!