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Excellent

All I can say is What The ????? Shyam Seriously ...
For a debut you did write very nicely !
Luved the AxeEffect !!!!
I wud like a pm for second part and plz keep it as a TS ie. Two Short plz don't turn it into an SS it wud ruin the magic ...Edited by Iluvmyself - 11 years ago

awesome😊waiting for the nest part..update soon

Superb story yar
i loved it a lot
and the perfume part:O oh my god!... i was laughing out so loud that my sister woke up and scolded me
i hope u continue with the story soon
i really really really loved it:-)

Nice OS!

what????????????? shyam is her bf??

omg 🤣

awesome, but Shyam as Khushi's boyfriend, no way in hell. 😛

OH I LOVED IT NW PLSSS CONTINUEEE