Whoa...way to go!!superb start...you have introduced the characters well...even though it was long when i was reading it, i didnt realize when it ended!!and a great place to end too!!shyam is khushi's boyfriend??arnav's heart(and as a matter of fact, even mine) must have sunk like the titanic!!!
To top it all...the whole thing was supposed to be a joke...!!!wow...anjali is a prankster...hard to believe but i can imagine it...:D...
Ohhh..the ROFL moment for me were the arnav-auto driver coversation and the Axe effect!!!for a moment i actually thought it was working on khushi and when she went ahead and sprayed it on the buffaloes, i was laughing more out of relief!!
Really well written!!
P.S:if you are continuing with( which i hope you are), then you need to change to it an FF!!(just telling you..!)
comment:
p_commentcount