ArHi OS: One More Day *Sequel posted on IF P. 15*

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BlueMystique

@BlueMystique

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Posted: 12 years ago

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@PersieV

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Posted: 12 years ago

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BITCH

MURDERER

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Well ARNAV IS A BAST AND I NEED TO KILL HIM MORE OFTEN WHAT THE ACTUAL BEEEPP!!

HOW DID HE NOT HAVE A CHOICE..

HE MADE HER CHOSE. How could he say? I guess we are done there? How?

Was it that easy for him to forget all the memories they shared? Was it that easy! you woman are a bitch for making Arnav cruel!

AND SHE RAN away! Typical Khushi but you can't blame her, on her wedding day she was Ditched and left stranded!

MOFO! The driver had to be drunken and hit her!

SERIOUSLY HOW MANY MORE TWISTS WERE YOU PLANNING ON WRITING!!!

I hate you.

I really do.

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inspiringstars

@inspiringstars

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Posted: 12 years ago

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what is this "something"?

This is so incredibly sad. Painfully Beautiful.

But sad. It make me choke, really it did!

Beautiful writing, honey, but I so hope the show doesnt take this route, this would be so freaking painful to watch.

Thanks for the PM

Edited by inspiringstars - 12 years ago

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

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Posted: 12 years ago

may i also know what is this reserving for????😆

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lazyleaves

@lazyleaves

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Posted: 12 years ago

Ridz maar khaayegi! Itna sad OS :(

When I read the firs part, I knew it was something sad.

But when I read the 2 hours ago part, I thought may be there is something positive and you will turn around the first part! But after you wrote that he wants her to choose between him and her amma, my heart broke there :(

And then the accident 😭

The lyrics were beautifully weaved with the story.

A job well done but it still made me dukhi :(

Edited by lazyleaves - 12 years ago

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Samiya

@SamiyaIPKKND

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Posted: 12 years ago

I'm so glad arnav didn't choose this route and also glad nothing happened to khushi

Great OS dear

loved how you inserted the lyrics here

It was totally befitting

Normally I never read sad wala OS but I loved this one

*hugs*

Edited by SamiyaIPKKND - 12 years ago

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Fuj

@-ElmoFuj-

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

Wow, an OS from you after so long! Loved it to bits.

I was so overjoyed to see arnav standing up for khushi, coming to the mandap and engulfing her in his arms telling her he would marry her!

And then BOOM! The issue of mothers came in between again!

While reading, i didnt know who was wrong. I mean could see justification in both their reasoning.

Arnav being arnav, how could he tolerate his mother's murderer even if it wasnt her fault. This situation seemed so confusing for everyone. Arnav, khushi, khushi's mother. Cuz all were innoccent in their us as what my mind could conclude.

Khushi, how could she cut ties with the woman who raised and made her what she is today? How can she let her go for a man she just met? She couldnt!

BUT, the end but, when khushi was met with an accident, i forgot all! It was just khushi! Why did she have to suffer? A called off wedding with the one she loved like anything, humiliation and then the accident which i assume was the end of her. 😔

sooo heart wrenching! But beautifully written, amazng! Loved the whole OS ! Loved how khushi stood up for what SHE thought was right! Beautiful! <3

Edited by Fan_ipkknd1 - 12 years ago

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.x-bumblebee-x.

@.x-bumblebee-x.

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Posted: 12 years ago

Res..

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Nahiii Ridz how could you.. 😭 dammit..made me cry..

Bachari khushi always caught in the middle..
I'm glad she stuck by her mother, without her she wouldn't be the woman she is today..
Ergh, arnav needs to move on.. I can't believe that he still hates garima even though she is innocent..
The last sentenced killed me :'(

Edited by .._sonii_.. - 12 years ago

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ipkknd_lover

@ipkknd_lover

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Posted: 12 years ago

omg ...that was sad :'(

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HeadOverHeels

@HeadOverHeels

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Thank you for the dedication. And, the scene was beautifully done... It actually did take me back to that part of CE, so you got the emotions down pat.

I love the turn you added in there, and how well you drew it out... It flowed and blended well, you could feel it building, and then it came about... and I adore when that happens in a story.

You're a marvel, Ridz Cracker!!

Muuuahhh!!

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