(ArHi FF)Arranged Marriage Thd-3 New thread Pg-163

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dqkytm

@dqkytm

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#951

loved this part! cant wait for the next!

want the "love" to come up soon! cant wait for that part.

and briliant writing :) really!

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Sona

@sparikh

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#952

Nice update...getting A's POV is crucial for the story;

A needs a big zhatka & hopefully the dismissal of phone call will do the trick!

-Sona

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kristin

@sweet_5

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#953

Poor khushi, but I'm glad she's bothering him
I don't even know what to say about Arnav, so i'll pass because I'am not amused

he needs a swift kick in the crotch...more then once

I don't kno if u rmr the comment I left yesterday after u posted your authors note about silent readers. But Im almost finished up with the rest of the story! I'll resume some of the reading after class. I also cheated and read this one before the others LOL my bad, it's just I saw this chapter starting off with Arnav in front of a mirror after showering. *HELLO*

I have no problem with the pace of the story, just like I had no problem with the pace the show had in the beginning with khushi working in the raizada home. The writing is mature and it makes the story more real.

Waiting for the next update!

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moomin4455

@moomin4455

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#954

Awesome part!! Poor poor Khushi! She's going to be stranded again because Arnav can't entertain wanting his wife👎🏼. Arnav, dude, just chill!!

Cannot wait for the next part!

So sooo sorry to hear that V323 has gone - can't believe the behaviour of some people 😡

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monaya_sajan

@monaya_sajan

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#955

wonderful update yaar!!!!!!! but plz pm me from next tym onwards!!!!!!! plzzz

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namirakhan

@namirakhan

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#956

this was after such a long gap but the intensity was intact !

how r they going to get together ? i guess arnav has to make his first move and i am waiting for his pride to crumble before kushis charm !

i have a feeling kushi wud b at the same place he left her ?

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saarah96

@saarah96

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#957

ooh love this story
wonder if something happened to khushi?

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twinkle662

@twinkle662

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#958

Hey! This was an awesome update filled with both Khushi & Arnav's turmoil. I really liked Khushi's stubbornness to which Arnav had to give in. We need to see more of that! I can't wait to read about Khushi's experience in the unknown world! But definitely I have to agree with you that love cannot happen at a fast pace, especially with so much factors! Thank you for the update!!

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esmeralda111

@esmeralda111

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#959

its lovely to have you back...n u can't imagine the happiness, when I saw this update..😊 though it seems that nothing much happened but it helps us to give insight into Arnav's mind, which was crucial. I think he will regret dismissing the call later. lets c.

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nyxx

@nyxx

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#960

Crap. No. Why did he not pick up that call?

Im pretty sure shes in need of him, and hes going to understand that the hard way. I also think this "holiday" trip will mark a turning point in their relationship, in their story :)

This part was great like always! Love how you explore Arnav's emotions, be it anger, frustration, or in need of Khushi...hes attracted to her, and hes coming to terms with it even though he is still in denial...but the lovebug leaves no one alonee... ;)

Krani, special mention to the flow of this show...the pace, be it slow, makes read all the more fun...it feels so much more realistic and I think most can agree that such relationships do not come to "i love yous" right away...there is a gradual growth that needs to be taken, shown, written, and weaved...and its just not their relationship, but its also about both of them as individuals...and the void they fill in each others lives...one breaks, the other one will pick up...but it happens..eventually.

Your a great story teller and Ive told you that many times :)

Do update soon :)

- Dee

P.S Why have you not added the and [MEMBERS ONLY] code on your work?! Girl, your writing is really really good...and with the amount of plagiarism that happens on the internet regarding Arnav Khushi FF's...someone will put their name on your words...

Edited by nyxx - 12 years ago

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