i have been following your ff religiously and couldn't gather to comment for so long but i had to drop in to appreciate you and your story ...their story is what probably happens in real albeit few parts when two strangers get married ...it can't jump to happily ever after so soon ...
i like how you respond to each angle the flashback,arnie's obvious physical attraction with his hatred being married to her, nani and anjali's attempt to get them together, khushi's fears be her dark phobia or attacked by her husband😊 all are done beautifully...there's a depth to your style of narrating that catches us off guard and its brilliant...and i see you have plenty other stories too will read them as i get to them...
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