SwaRon SS--Hopes and Desires! Last part on pg 60.

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Swaron79

@Swaron79

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Posted: 13 years ago

#81

Haha.. 🤣🤣

Damn Hilarious update !!

Waiting for the next part eagerly Surbhi !!

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Trouble_Magnet

@Trouble_Magnet

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Posted: 13 years ago

#82

U crack me up 🤣🤣

The song "tum toh thehre pardesi" has become one of my fav songs now..😆

Great OS 😆

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ananya randhawa

@Ananya.SwaRon

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+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#83

congrats for turning your OS into a SS..

poor swayam! well,looks like he would have to pay hard for his mistake..and the song scenario it was the best.. firstly *pehla nasha* and then * Tum toh thehre pardesiii'* ROFL ROFL 🤣

would like to get a bit desi here..MAST UPADTE!

please update soon..

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Nehal92

@Nehal92

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#84

whoa!! that was just too gud...

poor swayam MRS SHARON RAI PRAKASH SEHKHAWAT IS A TUFF NUT!!

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Meera

@MirageSwaron

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#85

That was a wonderful update with romance and hilarity...nice approach I thought...definitely excited to read the next part...update soon Surbhi

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ShrutikaSwaRon

@ShrutikaSwaRon

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#86

Read the 2 parts bck to bck...amazing update...luved ur song selection...sorry for commenting late.

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pooja123456

@pooja123456

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Posted: 13 years ago

#87

hey...
pm me wen u update next!!!!
nyc post

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Twinkle_d3

@Twinkle_d3

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#88

Hey awsm...
Naughty swaron r always fun to read..
That pardesi song is too funny...
Pls update son...
Nd pm me if you can..

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surbhimathur

@surbhimathur

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: cuteswayu
awesome update.. 👏 swayam trying to pacify Sharon and sharon giving him a tough time... the song selection was hillarious..😆 swayam nervous and blushing..awiee..😳 loved it..😃 muje kehna to nh padega na ki muje nxt update ka bhi pm chahiye..😆 lolz..maine 1 sep ko res kia tha..😆 sory for dis,bt i ve already told u the reason..😳

Dosttt merii! 🤗
lol thank you so much for this nisha! 😃
i am super glad that you liked it!
aur tjhe bilkul bhi kehne ki zarurat nhi hai..u vil surely receive the pm!! 😊

Originally posted by: kriyaanshd3
awww! swayam 2 cute! haath pakdna chahta tha par sharon ne nahi dekha...
pehla nasha! haye...
🤣🤣🤣 tum toh thehre pardesi...
brilliant sharon!!!👏

Thank you so much for such a sweet comment!! 😃

Originally posted by: dips098
hehehe ...awesome post ...tum toh thehre pardesi ...🤣🤣... angry sharon ...swayam manaofying sharon ...too cute ... 👏👏👏

Thank you for liking and commenting deep! 😃
means a lot..and that too coming from a great writer! 😊

[quote=Rutu]🤣>>> This was for the last song. Hilarious to the core🤣

Coming to the update, so Sharon is not going to be a easy wife, that was known knowing how difficult it is to pataofy her. But Swayam being Swayam not only he dared to sleep on their first night of marriage but now is in a hope that she will forgive him that easily. Nah😈

Loved it when Swayam blushed😆 Sounds funny but adorable too😳 That's like our Majnu boy gushing on hearing pehela nasha.

I am eager to know what is gonna happen next.

Loved it Surbhi ,update real soon[/quote]

Thank you soo much rutu for such a big and lovely comment!! 😃
I am glad you liked it..
and yes sharon is a tough nut! and swayam vil never change...vil remain cute n adorable! 😳
i will update real soon!!

[quote=honeyangel]Dude !!! You were bang on to the post 👏 😆 I cant stop my laughter on the song.. "Tum to thaireh pardesi... saath kya nibhaoge" Hehehehehehe 🤣 Loved the post totally and really Thanxx a ton for this.. Love ya for this.. and hope sharon maan jaye yaar poor swayam 😆 And thanx for the P.M 😛 Waiting for the next part 😛 [/quote]

Thank you so much honey! 😃
i am happy that you liked the song! 😳

[Quote= Sudha-SK]🤣 🤣 Tum tho thehra pardesi - Really 🤣 🤣

Poor Swayam 😆

Coming to the update, loved it Surbhi 😃 Loved the insights to their minds your gave. Sharon still angry and Swayam trying his best to convince her is always a fun read. Loved how they could reminisce about their college days when the pehla nasha song played. And yeah Swayam blushing 😳 while Sharon is busy Staring at her cute husband 😳 was nicely done. Looking forward to read how Swayam manages to pacify Sharon. It was a fun read Surbhi, loved it. [/quote]

Thank you so very much Sudha!! 😃
Getting such a sweet comment from a terrific writer is an compliment itself! 😳
Thanks once again! 😊

[quote= -Nia-]This was hilarious Surbhi. I just caught up with this SS.

Swayam slept on their first night.🤣

Thanks for the PM,update soon. =)[/quote]

Thank you for the comment nia! 😃

[quote=neetha]res🤗

unres

🤣🤣🤣🤣watta song🤣🤣🤣

this was awesome surbhi..poor swayam abhi bhi he is strugglin to manofy sharon..😎she is a tough gal..😈.pehla nasha part was awesome..

m still laughin wit tum toh tehre pardesi🤣🤣🤣🤣

p.s thanx a lot fr updatin jaan🤗[/quote]

Awww...neethaaa!! 🤗
thank you so much yaar..for such a super sweet comment! 😃
really made my day! 😊

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surbhimathur

@surbhimathur

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#90

Originally posted by: sadiyaswaron
Awesome update
Swayam manofying sharon but sharon being diva how can she forgive him easily
Swayam blush hearing pehla nasha song was soo adorable
Tum to thehra pardesi 🤣
Sharon the smarty pants poor swayam
Update it soon

Thank you so much gal for such a nice comment!! 😃

i am glad that you liked it! 😳

Originally posted by: swaronland
awesome update👏 aww swayam trying all cute tricks for sharon but our smart sharon 😎
Pehla nasha
tum to thehre pardesi🤣🤣 i never ever thought this song will suit for swaron🤣but u perfectly put it as per situation😆
pls continue soon & thanks for pm

Thank you so much for liking and commenting...😃
i am glad that you liked the song! 😊
it just striked in my head and i wrote it here!

Originally posted by: Suku_SwaRon
Sur kya gana tha yaar😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 tum be na.

Sharon is so so naughty and swayam bechara what can he do against her. Awwieee sur ithana sweet update hai yaar par bahuth chottu tha.. Well abi kab dobarah update karengi tu???? Jaldi karna yaar. The update is awesome like you 🤗

Sukuuu!! 🤗
Thanks a tonn my dreamland friendd! 😃
okay next vil be isse thodi si big! 😊
thank you so much for liking it my friend! 😳

Originally posted by: Luvsd3
surbhi it was damn beautiful yaar...beachara swayum...hehe tum to thehre pardesi...awesome song selection dear...sharon is really tough to manofy...swayum you had to plan something really special for sharon...
luvd it surbhi update soon

Thanxx himani dost! 🤗

SwaRon toh forever aise hi rahenge!! 😆
thankyou again for such a sweet comment! 😊

Originally posted by: kool kanz
cute 1...sharon angry with swayam n he tryin his level best 2 convince her but our diva likes hving fun with him😉😉...thank u for d pm...update soon

Thank you for liking and commenting! 😊

Originally posted by: marauder
🤣 Hahaha. Really 'Tum to thehre Pardesi' ? 😆 Really interesting and hillarious choice. But question arises Swayam ko wo gana ki CD rakhne ki jarurat hi kya thi ?😛
Fabulous update. Sharon will remain angry it was known and I was looking forward to see Swayam's antics to make her forgive him. And this update didn't disappoint me. Ingeniously written. Lookng forward to the next update.
P.S - If it isn't trouble for you do tell Swayam so kyun gaya tha ?

I really like your curiosity shishir! 😳
but agar maine sab kuch ek saath reveal kr diya toh yeh SS toh gaya samjho! 😆
haha so just wait n watch! i vil reveal everything soon! 😉
Thank you so so much for this wonderful comment! 😃
i am super glad that you liked it!! 😊

Originally posted by: shaani2209
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Kya Song lagaya Sharon ne🤣🤣🤣...
Awesome update surbhi...
Swayam trying to make up for his mistake but poor fellow, Mrs Shekhawat ain't gonna be easy😉
Swayam ke pehle nasha ko Pardesi banadiya sharon ne😆
Thanks for the pm...
update soon...

Thank youu so muchh rosh!! 😃
i am glad that i made you laugh so much!! 😆

Originally posted by: tanzz15
Oh girlie,haas haas ke halat kharab ho raha hai mera!"tum to thehre pardesi???" and that "tiring-tiring"beat served as cherry on the cake.feeling like hugging u tightlyyy!! just loveee u dear...tiring!;D

Thank you so very much gal!! 😃
means a lott! 😳