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Surbhi

@..Surbhi..

IF-Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#21

really good job dear

and nice vm too :D

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Meera

@MirageSwaron

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Luvd teh OS Ananya...and the VM too tho I wished the song culd hav been heard without teh background dialogues and score coming in

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629164

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Nice one...but what happend after that??? ending is abrupt..

thanks for the pm...

PS: sorry for being late...

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Winds.of.Winter

@Winds.of.Winter

Senior Member

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

new concept!😊😊 liked it.very nice 😛 but arent u gonna continue it?? it was abrupt n sad ending

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beeny

@beeny

Goldie

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

ye end adhura sa he plz next part do???

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Trushna

@swaronland

Goldie

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

awesome os

thanks for pm

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rutuja

@rk_swaron

Newbie

Posted: 11 years ago

#27

😃NIcE yArr... GRt THe vm waS alSO VerYy GUDd... LOvED It NIcE JOb ...!!! 😃😃😃

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Phantasm

@Phantasm

IF-Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Ananya it was awesome but you know you can continue it, i mean you can elaborate more, like did they talk when they met after so long, just a suggestion.
But nice work😊

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Himani

@OceanicRockStar

IF-Rockerz

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#29

ananya it was jst wow...like everything is going on in front of me...yaar great writing skill. do pm me next time.

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Jum

@-Jum-RulzZ-

IF-Rockerz

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#30

Nice one.. but the ending shd've been a different way!
more precisely it should have been in ur Style ! :)
it was mostly The episode! :)

But nice... Awessome skills on writing :D

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