SwaRon OS THE OTHER DAY last part!

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ananya randhawa

@Ananya.SwaRon

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: tanzz15
hi ananya!sorry 4 being a bit late dear.. perfect end of this os,i must say.god,ur descriptive senses r damn good! love u girlie..huggs.

hey taniya, you are no late dear, and thanks for always liking and commenting on my works. hugs to you too 🤗

Originally posted by: meevee
It was a beautiful ending Ananya...u stood true to teh basic nature of both of them, looked at things teh way both wuld hav done...Rey was a calming presence, definitely kind of steadied Sharon's state of mind...teh confession was beautiful and most importantly, the way we wuld luv Sharon to do so...it was a nice fulfilling OS which ended too soon I thought, mayb u shuld have extended it to an SS at least...😊

hey meera,as of now i've no time but would surely take your wish under consideration.Thanks for all your support .

Originally posted by: d3fan4eva
Amazing update...luvd da super cute confession...thankxx fr such a wonderful os...keep writing more nd more such os/ss/ff...

Thanks for your comment

Originally posted by: Luvsd3
Beautifully written ananya...
sharey convo ws gud but the best part was sharon decorated terrece same as 6mnths before and accepts her feeling there only...
the way sharon states the facts after he left her was really amezingly written...luvd all cute lil things which sharon did to distract her from his memories...u beautifully comprise tom cruise wid our majnu...and last the newtons 3 law...very well enguilfed wid their love story!!!...in tatality i luvd it!!!

thanks himani di,i'm delighted with your comment. and our majnu is no less than Tom Cruise.!

Originally posted by: d_3rockskaren
awsome...do write more on swaron!!!!!!!!!!!!

thank you..!

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Nehal92

@Nehal92

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#82

loved it anu!!! :)))

just superb!!! i like anything and everything on swaron and u writing it is like cherry on the cake !! :)

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Rashmi

@mrash

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#83

Such a looonggg ad NICEEE update...

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Neeraj

@nature2

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#84

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Shishir Darsh

@marauder

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#85

First I would like to say sorry for the delay of my comment.

Coming to the update. It was just adorable. Each portion was nicely carved out. Starting with Sharon and Rey part. It was written in perfectly balanced way. I liked how you kept Rey in the loop but still till a certain limit. It was beautifully done.

In the next part Sharon's state of mind was nicely written. Her pain, her love, her happiness everythng was quite evident from it. But the best portion of your OS was definitely the end portion. I liked how you kept the same setting. It was a master stroke. And the dialogues of Sharon was just too good. It appeared natural and straight from heart. Whether it was about the camera or Sharon reading Swayam's favourite subject. Masterly done.

Loved this OS to the core :)

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d3_lover--

@d3_lover--

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#86

it really was great!
the humour came out very well..and the undertone of romance that gave you was commendable. loved the fact that sharon envies swayam's long loose strands and most of all his pony...! i would agree he looks super-hawt in ponies...!

waiting for more such works of yours..!

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Karen Johnson "Maria"

@Karen_sharon

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#87

Ananya..why did I not get a pm for this..I wanted one and now when I read it I felt..mein kitna late ho gayi ise padne ke liye..But the update was just mindblowing man..I luvd it like hell...Luvd the confession..Physics...Tee..Tomcruise..and just everything man!😃😃😃😃😃😃