That was like the most unexpected twist in the story. I never imagined that you would bring a twist like that in the story. Nicely played. I love with when I'm surprised.
I felt the emotions flow freely this time as if both of them were eager to let it all out. This was an extremely bang on example of denouement, with everything heightened and given a peaceful, calm end.
Then comes the most highlighted part of your works. The descriptions. You nail it every time. I can just visualize everything thanks to your detailed, clear descriptions. It's a treat to read your descriptions. They are so accurate, for the lack of a better word.
Swayam is your usual, same old Swayam - understanding and loving. But your Sharon here is a milder version of the Sharon on the show. Probably because of her age and her recent traumatizing experience. It is a significant change that gives us hope that with time and experience she would turn into a fine young woman.
This chapter was serene to read. The ending was hopeful and soothing. The song appropriate. Avery well written and well executed plot. Beautiful job Sudha.👏
I'm eagerly waiting for you to come up with many more engrossing stuff.😃
Love,
Nidhi. 🤗
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