ArHI FF: Teenage Love#2-Chap 18 Upd! - Page 51

Originally posted by: Evaindahouse

What an amazing chappie!!

It was sooo good!

Sorry for the late reply, only got to read it today though tanitha told me

2 days back. Been busy wid school lately.

Coming back to the update:

I loved the hug! it was sooo adorable!

And when Arnav and Khushi spied on Anjali and Akash, It was

really well written. I imagined the whole scene perfectly!

The flash back was also really touching! I hope u reveal everything soon!

The ending, when Aparna and Anita pulled his cheeks was also adorable!

I just loved how Vivek defended Khushi! It shows that he cares about friendship more

than love, and I personally loved that! Gosh! Vishaka doesn't trust him?

She defs doesnt deserve him!

I also loved how Khushi slapped the senior for making fun of her and arnav! It was epic!

And I just love how Arnav defended Khushi as well. It was really sweet!

HEY! You're reading the hunger games? I've read them and seen the movies!

They are absolutely amazing! i loved the way u included them into the update!

I am personally more of a Gale fan. Wait. You have'nt read all three books right?

Cos I was bout to give u a spoiler. But yah, once u finish we can talk about it!

Thanks for the PM!

Update soon!

Thankyou so much dear.🤗 Nah, you are not late i just updated the whole chapter 1 hour back, I bet even Annie hasn't read the whole thing as yet.😆

Aww, Thanks alot.🤗 I was so feisty about it, if it really was nice or just crammed in between, I didn't know really, i do go retarded at times (these days getting more of those attacks😆) So it wasn't very difficult for me to imagine either, you know why? Because I have been in that situation trillion of times with my best friend, so we sneak the same way they did.😆

I will surely, I just need to get everything fitted in before things fall into place.😉 Well, Vishaka doesn't trust him yeah and their couple is inspired by a real life couple (my best friend and his girl friend), so I will portraying Vishaaka the way i thought of my bff's gf, maybe a one sided character it will be but I cant help it, I never was fond of that girl anyway.


I have seen the movies, and yeah i have just read the first part in I dont know I record time of 7 hours.😆 But well it doesn't matter, my friends have been filling in on what happens in the next two parts even though I told them not too, and I still dont think I am really changing sides. I really like Peeta alot, maybe because like Khushi's dialogue said I feel for the guy.😳 Is the spoiler something to do with Gale loving Katniss? Haha, I know he does, he even confesses but she rejects right? 😉 And definitely Hunger Games is one of the best series I have read (obviously after the Lord Of The Rings), but I love love loved it.❤️ Ahan, and you bet, I'll be finshing it once I get the books and then we'll talk about it in detail.😃

Superb update...

thanks 4 d pm

Originally posted by: sushna

woww...awesome...

thankx for pm...

Thankyou so very much dear.🤗

Originally posted by: Stapleton

Superb update...

thanks 4 d pm

Thanks alot dear.🤗

Glad you liked it.😃😃

Originally posted by: urvi678

AE. I love it :DD

Its so amazing that you can write such awesome stuff. Way to go :!

Please update soon :))

Hey,

Thanks a ton dear.🤗

Aww, that is very sweet of you to say that.😳

I'll try my bets to updated asap, cant say anything about it though.😳

Originally posted by: gayatri_y

That's really wonderful update
Is the girl in the precap khushi
Thanks for the pm

Thankyou so much honey.🤗

Oh well, I am not in the position to answer any questions right now, so lets see, you will have t wait for the story to unfold to know that.😉😉

Originally posted by: mandy15

fabulous update dear 😊😊😊👏👏👏

loved it:)

Thanks alot love.🤗

Originally posted by: ShikhaKhushi

Cuteness overload over here!!!!!!!!

Aww, I knnow.☺️

Thankyou anyway.🤗

Originally posted by: shabi8

nice update...

thanks for the pm...

Thanks alot dear.🤗

Originally posted by: emistry

hmmm so many things going on at once in this chapter... Glad arnav and khushi found out about the dance..and they faced the people head on!! Liked khushi's fiestiness!!

You know i thought with parents.. it was a love triangle.. but with the flashback.. i am not so sure anymore! I wonder what role arnav's father played in their friendship...

Hmmm Liked the precap... i wonder who the mystery girl is?!? khushi?!?

Ahan yeah very right.😳 After a lot of while I have come up with an eventful chapter.😆

Thankyou.🤗

Oh yeah, i dont blame you everybody thought the same and I did say to keep put because the ideas will change as the story progresses, so its never too late to know what really happened.😳

Ahan, cat answer that, you will ahve to wait for the update to get that one out.😉

Originally posted by: -afsha-

Hats off to Vivek

Jus loved hw he stood for Khushi

Khushi is blaming herself pata nahi ab kya hoga

Bth Arnav n Khushi fought for each other hehehe

Update soon

Oh yeaahh, Friendship for me, and for my characters always comes before love.😳

Wahin hoga jo manzoor e khuda hoga.😆

Ahan I'll try my bets to cant make any commitments.😉

Originally posted by: debby_11

i loved this ff really beautiful :)

continue soon :)

Aww, that is so sweet of you to say that.😳

Thankyou so much.🤗

Originally posted by: mistyrains

Loved the chapter <3

Originally posted by: KSG_luv

Awesome update! 😃

Thanks alot both of you.🤗😃

Originally posted by: N.Mussarrat

I love this FF!!!

Aww, so kind of you to say that dear.😳


Thankyou so very much.🤗

Originally posted by: kiruthikasanju

finally u updated 15 B.. thx yaar.. gud one

Hahha, yeah finally.😆

Thankyou.😳🤗

Originally posted by: ipkkndfanforeva

Heyy! 🤗

Awesome 1st part!😃
Eagerly waiting for the second!

But im really sleepy now😒
So ill read the next part tom and then ill comment in detail abt both the parts!!😊

So dont reply to the comment until i edit it!😛😆 ( i know silly🤪)

Updated! :

Okay..
First of all i know im realllyyy late...and i should hav done this before but i realised i didnt! Im really sorry😭...So here it is!

HAPPYYY BIRTHDAYYY!!😃🤗 (obviusly belated😛)
Hope u had an awesome one!

Second of all , Thank you sooo much for updating today!! You are 3 days early!🤗

First part was just Great!!😃
Liked the 2 situations in which both of them said something but the other person didnt realise it!
Arnav and Khushi bonding!👍🏼
I too love Hunger Games!! The series was just damn addictive! i finished 1 book a day!!😃
and Peeta is not stupid!😉

Wow...the adults past seems quite good!
What the hell changed!?? Arjun is just too weird now!

And,
Wow...a lot of things happening in the second part!!
Everyones angry/depressed!!

What A Slap!! lol 😆
I really like Khushi character sketch! shes so bold and strong!
A & K supporting each other when neone else says nething abt them!

Crap V & V break up! 😲no wonder he was angry and lashed out at K!
Looks like Khushis troubles took over their relationship!
I really like Vivek, how he supports Khushi no matter what!
And Vishaka is stupid...if V liked K then why d hell would he go out with her!!😕

Fantastic Updates as usual!!👏👏
Loved them!❤️

I also like the part where u explain why u chose the title and all the events explaining it! It shows how much though & work u put in a chapter!
And the result = AMAZINGG!⭐️


Hope u update soon!! If not my "stalking" will continue!😉

PS - This is the longest comment iv ever written!!😃

Okay, so I dont know how to thank you. Thanks alot honey for the lovely long comment.🤗


Aww, Thanks, it doesn't matter I have been celebrating and receiving birthday wishes for over a month now.😆 I just got a birthday OS gift yesterday imagine that!😃 Oh yes this birthday has been very very special to me. It had been the best est one ever!😃


Hahhaha, I know, I wanted to update on Thursday to save me the trouble of Pming but anyways, jootein partein if I would have delayed it any longer.😆


Oh yeah, I loved to the core. Yes definitely Peeta is not stupid who said Peeta is stupid, Arnav is paaggal.🤪😆 Yeah me too, actually I finished the first book in 7 hours.🤣

Oh erm I hope you are not confusing Arjun and Aryan together they are two different people just to clear it out.😳 Arjun is ARNAV's dad, and Aryan is KHUSHI's dad.😳 Just wanted to make it clear just in case you got confused.


Hahahha, yeah the second part was everybody on fire.😆


Ahan Thankyou so much honey.🤗

Girls are naturally stupid, not every is Khushi or not every boy is Vivek some people just dont have the right brain to think.

Aww, that is so very sweet of you to say that, I am blessed to have a reader like you, Thanks once again.🤗

Hhahahhaa, keep stalking because I myself dont know when i will be updating next.😆

Aww, I thankyou from the bottom of my heart for writing such a long lovely comment, i appreciate it.😳

Originally posted by: kamalapushpa

finally u updated!!!!!!

dis was truly an eventual chapter...

kushi n arnav defendin each oter was awsum...kushi so bold man...

vivek has proved tat hes a true frnd by takin kushis side...

i dont tink vishaka wud hv spoken abt kushi lyk tat if she lykd her...

who was tat girl in d precap??

i love dis ff...

beautiful update...

tanx 4 d pm...

continue soon

Hhahahha, everybody is partying because I finally updated.🤣 I just realized how lazy I have been in updating.🤣

Ahaan yeah, friendship comes before everything.😳 well, you know I dont think she would have any reason to like Khushi at all. After all Khushi is more closer to the boy that she likes, obviously she would be irked, but since she doesn't have a rational mind to think you would expect that kind of reaction from her.

Oh erm,you will have to wait for the update to tell that.😳

Aww, that is so sweet of you to say that.☺️

Thankyou so very very much dear.🤗