ArHI FF: Teenage Love#2-Chap 18 Upd!

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Evaindahouse

@Evaindahouse

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#1001

Darn You Batool! You are waaay tooo awesoome!!!!

I just fell in love with your writing all over again!! Teenage Love rocked my wooorld (well mind and brain really! 😆)!!!

AAAH! I feel so honoured to be dedicated in your thread!!! AAAH! Anz told me at school and I was just like R U SERIOUS!! Shut up! Can't be true!! And I raced home Logged onto TL And again AAAHH! Thanks sooo much! I swear to god I'll be a great commenter and liker! 😛

OK OK, Lemme give u my feedback b4 I forget everything I want to say!

Awww! How cute is ARNAV? I am going gaga over him!! The Ironing scene was just awesome! And the way he literally wrecked the dressing table made me giggle!! Too cutee!

As usual, the car scenes were waaay to good! And I just love how Akash and Anjali soo jokingly scold Arnav! They rock! Best bro-sis eva! (Aftaa me and ma bro o-course! LOLOL kidding!) Loved Arnav's sarcasm!!

I loved the school scenes! The Vivek-Khushi relationship!! The Arnav-Khushi relationship!! OOOHH Too good! LOL The bathroom thing was epic! Cracked up in that part!

And the assembly scene was also hilarious! I am really wondering why Arnav never goes to field trips! SUSPENSE! Lu it luv it luv it!

OMG! Khushi actually said that! (nobody did, nobody has to. I already know you are mine!) AAH! Go Khushi! U rock!

Khushi's friends are such darlings! Infact everyone are such darlings! Taking care of Appy! (love the nickname by the way) So supportive and caring! Touched by it, really!

Gah! 😡 I am dying to know why Arnav doesnt want to go the field trip! And I loved the Arnav-Appy scene! So aaadorable!

The mother and daughter relationship was also really sweet!😳

The flashback! Best flashback evaaah! It was soo funny, sweet, charming, adorable and totally mad me go I WANT TO MEET THEM! LOL

In short Batool, U are just pure awesomness! Missed ur updates but u're back witha bang!!

And soz for the late replies and all, stupid exams going on! Always time for TL! Luved it

and lemme just say I can't wait for the special update! I am sooo stalking TL until then! But daaam! There had to be one more chappie!

Congrats on ur new thread!!! YAY!

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nareshSV

@nareshSV

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#1002

Hmmm...finally I have read the update...after a long time u have posted...I am a bit busy with all my work and been very late to comment on this...😔

Anyways, I am very sad knowing that I wont get any update for WAT...one of my first FF's ever to read...so sad but...as you said in your note better wait for a good update rather than having a bad one...so here I am waiting for it impatiently and you have sprinkled water on it...ok I wil wait but a huge hug for u for WAT...I love it...

Khushi and her never ending antics...poor boy arnav...got scared and burnt his fingers...oh boy...😆 khushi really scared arnav, scared or whatever...she is really stupid...

And why did arnav take her to his room...after that convo...and boy he is so caring from now itself...ironig her skirts...getting her things she needed...good going arnav...

The way khushi had taken care of arnav adorable and the siblings really u are just making them so funny...I love them...they always wanna get into the gossips or create some and just wanna pluck the hair out of each other...reminding me the moments with my sister...

In this update u really reminded me of school days, getting ready for school is one unforgettable thing, your Mom being running behind you making you eat and get ready for school...thank u for that...

The washroom scene...hahahha...khushi can make arnav go mad and even make him forget himself...and the girl there getting crimpson I am sure it will get a guy to his nerves...being caught in that position...hahahhaa...

I really cant beleive that arnav not going to those trips...who will find them boring yaar...its really fun...and the way khushi wandering around arnav to know whats going on with him and vivek...and asking him that are they planning against her...oh man so cutee...and the way she made a fool out of all of the members in the house making them beleive that arnav is going for the trip,...hahaha really I cant hold my laughter while reading...amazing...

The flash back, you have placed in a manner that all the three fiends are thinking about the same situation at the same time...just like we see in movies...hmmm great...work...its very interesting...

The precap...really did mayank said that...arnav had a crush on khushi...hmmm you make us wait for yet another update...hopw you will post it soon...

The special part precap what to say...nothing just wanna see what will happen over there...he is carrying her to where? and that in public Oh I wonder whether it is in the field trip...?

As always a biiiggg cheerzzz...for ur work...👏