~~Dil Hai Tumhara~~SWARON FF - Page 24

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Posted: 11 years ago
loved it

finally u updated
very eager to read our donald n daisy's meet 😊

next time update sooon
n plsss make it reallly lonnnggg
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Posted: 11 years ago
additional*

forgot to mention
that i just love the way u
insert pics in between

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Posted: 11 years ago
Comment edited on page 30 😊

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/68105756
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Posted: 11 years ago
its awesome
loved it
loving the story
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey awesome update !! I just loved reading it! Sorry thoda late comment kiya coz exams chal rahe the 😛 I'm so happy u gave a long update! As always i loved ur use of pictures. And also how u use everybody's talking style especially Neha 😆

The part I loved the most was the dance. Unka duet dance. U described it really very well! 😃

I can't wait for the next update!Thanks for the PM! Do PM me!!

And best of luck for your xams! 👍🏼 You'll rock them 😃 !
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Posted: 11 years ago
BBM 🤗
finally you updated. though a small one,it was as good as your previous ones. the Donald-Daisy fiasco was soo cute. and what to say about Swayam's dance,he is our Indian MJ. while Sharon is our indian Shakira [though not a belly dancer 😆]. loved the first line with which you started 
"Sharon: guys isse luck ki nahi humme zarurat hai. After all iska dance jo tolerate karna parega. I am sure isse dance toh aata nahi hai and now we will have to tolerate his nonsense dance.  " 😆 😆
the storyline was nicely scripted with the perfect amount of Humor,romance,chemistry and nostalgia to it. Loved it. waiting for the next update,please update soon. 😳

P.S:the salsa dance which came out of the blue was really good.
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow..love this ff..its awesome!
do continue soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
edited...😎
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3104783&PID=68105513&#68105513
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Posted: 11 years ago
You finally updated and I loved it !! The way Sharon told Swayam that he couldn't dance and Swayam proving her wrong by impressing everyone, eventually becoming the 6th dancer of Team Weakling !! Loved the SwaRon dance and I really hope Swayam finds out that Sharon is his Daisy in the next update !!
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Posted: 11 years ago
You updated after long, but I'm glad you updated. Awesome update bud, I hope Swayam knows Sharon's daisy in next update.
 
Update soon and thanks for the PM (: