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You pulled a CV's on us, Kalyaani! Romance (potential I mean) interrupted by the family. Haha, just kidding! 

hi kalyaani:) i just finished reading the pursuit of love and forgive me for commenting only once! I was too engrossed in your story and i am also a busy mom of twins so kindly excuse my pathetic excuse:) but i love your story!! I will be honest, it started off really slow for me, but it makes sense how you have fully developed  and gone into details about each and every character mentioned so far. this story is like an onion with lots of layers and i like how you are peeling each and every layer...I love how  you have been describing khushi's clothes as i can create a better picture in my mind:)  shashi and khushi's relationship seems to be very special and i have been thinking about my abu while reading about them:) can't wait for khuhsi to meet the whole raizada clan...i have a feeling they will all love her...disappointed about arnav cancelling his dinner plans with khushi, but i am hoping you will show one pretty soon! I am in love with your arnav and khushi...:)  as promised, I will be commenting on both of your stories now that i am completely updated. looking forward to both the updates! take care. 

btw, i am glad your anjali is a badass woman;)  you have added an element of realism through her character by showing nobody is perfect. i am eager to see what becomes of her in your story. kindly PM me whenever you post your next updates. thank you! 

Originally posted by: Fuzzbucket

hi kalyaani:) i just finished reading the pursuit of love and forgive me for commenting only once! I was too engrossed in your story and i am also a busy mom of twins so kindly excuse my pathetic excuse:) but i love your story!! I will be honest, it started off really slow for me, but it makes sense how you have fully developed  and gone into details about each and every character mentioned so far. this story is like an onion with lots of layers and i like how you are peeling each and every layer...I love how  you have been describing khushi's clothes as i can create a better picture in my mind:)  shashi and khushi's relationship seems to be very special and i have been thinking about my abu while reading about them:) can't wait for khuhsi to meet the whole raizada clan...i have a feeling they will all love her...disappointed about arnav cancelling his dinner plans with khushi, but i am hoping you will show one pretty soon! I am in love with your arnav and khushi...:)  as promised, I will be commenting on both of your stories now that i am completely updated. looking forward to both the updates! take care. 

*Gasps*

Ah progress...He is on his best behaviour, almost, and trying his utmost to be charmingly friendly. Khushi too is getting closer to identifying and acknowledging her feelings, at least to herself.

LOVE your characters. This is like a beautifully woven piece of cloth. Can't wait for it to unfold! PM me when you update  ? Much love :) 

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Gooossshhh! That was one awesome update. The converstaion was sooo good. And Arnav. How easily did he turn such a simple statement by Khushi to something naughty.

Till now I was ur stalker bt when i saw tht i cud be the first ti reply i just just cudnt let it gooo. Eagerly waiting for more. U have got another fan here. U write awesomely. :D

Edited by Nadine12 - 11 years ago