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Posted: 11 years ago
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Yay! Update :)
 
Entertaining Kalyaani! I like :)
I truly did love the conversation between them; very witty and biting as usual 😉 
LOL at her reaction to Arnav calling her; so funny!
And he's like "what the hell?" to her response. I can actually imagine the expression on his face right now!
 
Sweet,
I mean naughty dreams Khushi. We all know who's going to be making an appearance in your dreams tonight 😛
Maybe,
On the other end, Arnav is preparing himslef for some subconcious action as well? 😉
 
We shall see.
 
Loved the update K!
 
Continue soon,
Cheers, Avi.
Edited by ArShifan1997 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
I just love my posts... :))))))

great update dear... i loved their texting banter... awww i m liking their convo by each update!!

i am always looking forward to ur next update!!!

update soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
aww that was sooo sweet! i like this text msgs flirting and i am so happy he called her. you are so good at creating perfect scenarios ...this one was very cute.i was hoping he would come to her bedroom window...la edward cullen style loll btw, i love maggie noodles too! thanks for the update and can't wait for the next one:) 
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Posted: 11 years ago
Now the heat has started, it's all witty between A&K leaving smile and laughter on me. Thanks. It was fun filled narration
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Posted: 11 years ago
Fantabulous update...Loved Arnav's and Khushi's bantering through text messages...Awaiting the next update and thanks for the PM Edited by bhadraprasad - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
I truly truly loved their conversation...!Even though they were not face to face their SMS banter was more than enough to enjoy the update!Witty but exciting and making me smile throughout the update!
Arnav wants an upper hand in their talks ..as always!
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Posted: 11 years ago
that was so cute conversation between arnav and khusi
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Posted: 11 years ago
hehehehe that was a really cute part... <3
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update...

thanks 4 d pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Chronic Arnav Obsession Disorder; I liked it.

I am really impressed with your choice of words.

I enjoyed verbal war between Arnav and Khusi. Two feisty creatures against each other, even sms was enough to turn on the war. And ASR is ASR, he instead called her than accepting defeat.

I have already mentioned this, but I really love the characterizations of your story, which I wish the show had too.