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Posted: 11 years ago
Kalyaani, really liked the first chapter.
Looking forward to the enfolding of the story. Continue soon!:)

-Sona
Edited by mistyrains - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey!!

You are writing and so well!!

I  am intrigued. For reasons I cannot even begin to explain.

Keep me posted. This promised to be a great journey!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi,

Interesting story.

Touching description of the thought processes in a hospital environment

You write well. Bookmarked.
Edited by serialwatcher16 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey there!!!

Is this your first attempt in writing?If so, you are doing extremely well...

Would love to read more from you...

I m just curious, any special reason for Arnav being adamant to buy that hospital?( other than the now CMO's rejection,that is)

Edited by cindrella255 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Ooohh! Me Likey!! In Fact- Gargee Luuurved the concept and I am waiting eagerly for the plot to unfold. A beautifully written and described chapter Hon- Keep up the great Work!👏

Thank You for the PM!

Cheers!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Like it?
 
K, i frikking loved it!!
 
First attempt at writing? kidding, right?
 
i liked, scratch that, LOVED the concept
 
Waiting for the next one =D
 
Update real queecckkllyyy, or i wont update TIAD and Glass.
 
Yeah,  i blackmail =D
 
Thankyou for the pm!
 
Love,
V
 
 
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Posted: 11 years ago
You have perked up my interest..interesting concept..will be eagerly waiting as to how the story is going to unfold.

Must confess that the hospital setting did dampen my spirits initially, but the kiss did wonders to it. ;)

Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Captivated! I do hope you continue. Why would you not? I see so much potential for dramatic conflict. I love your conception of Khushi--that feisty energy and brashness. Looking forward to more. 
Maya