Arhi OS:Choices we make Par2 pg16 updated on 7/21 - Page 15

Finally caught up with your OS, Shilpa.  Fantastic as all your writings are.  Loved it from the beginning till the end.  This forum is lucky to have you as a writer.  

hey shilpa

Originally posted by: angelirebelli

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Awesome update S.. I am a sucker for happy endings and KKGSR needs hers.. I love the way you stayed true to the characters and their reactions, feelings, thoughts and expressions.. Brilliantly done 👏

All the scenes fit so well and make for a happily ever after..*superlikes* ⭐️

As always, looking forward to more from you.. 😊

P.S.- Happy Birthday Mantle.. Wherez the party tonight 😉

Thank you so much Angeli.

You are too sweet, but glad you enjoyed the whole OS, and thanks for easing my fears about the OS not matching the characters.

I have to see if I can come back with more.

Thanks again.🤗

Originally posted by: Hot.Pink.Heels

Very cute!

Thank you.

Originally posted by: -Yuks-

Great. I loved the ending

Thanks Yuks.

Originally posted by: KaShGurTiLuverr

That was sooo beautiful <3

Thanks very much.

Originally posted by: Xaffi

Simply awesome loved it alot..

Thanks so much, glad you liked the OS.

Originally posted by: Crazy_1001

Nice long update! :D 

I thought that was really good! The way you conveyed all the emotions , and everyone's pain. The character devleopment.

LOL One thing I found funny was that...now that Anjali was happy with her child she wanted Arnav to be happy as well...dont get me wrong I like her gesture and all but found that kind selfish.

But awesome conclusion! :)

Thanks so much. This means a lot, I have never attempted to writ on Arhi, because I thought I would never be able to get their feelings and thoughts across like they are portrayed.

Yeah, I thought that it might look as Anjali was being selfish, but she started to realize when she found out the whole truth, and I think even now in the show she seems to be bit selfish, but once she really think about it she will realize what is right and what is wrong.

Thanks again.

Originally posted by: deepterence

u made me cry..out loud...luv the happy ending..and ur portrait of charcters is fantastic ,,,, true to their essence,,,,grt vocabulory...gd writing..luvd it ...so do one thing ...write more...!!!!

Awe...Thank you so much.

I will see if I can come back with a another Arhi soon.

Originally posted by: Xarina

Shilpa.  The whole OS was absolutely stupendous.  From the start, to the middle, to the end.  A lovely read.  Well done.😊

Thank you so much Xarina.🤗 You are the best, thanks so much for reading this different OS from my other work.