|One Shot| Their Rain Encounter *updated*

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C3_IF

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

nice & very well written. Loved the initial description of the weather & khushi's thoughts 👍🏼😊👏

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3serialfan40

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

well written and an interesting end!

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devsum

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Posted: 13 years ago

#23

Nice reading... but i want happy endings... Thanks for the PM.

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kaira101

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Posted: 13 years ago

#24

loved it

loved how the truth is out and everyone supports khushi

continue soon

really want to read another part or two😃

thanx for the pm

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JerryTheMouse

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Posted: 13 years ago

#25

Oh!

Oh! No!

I'm speechless! It's written beautifully! At the same time, it really isn't what I expected! 😭

You captured Khushi's pain and struggle beautifully! And then Payal's anger! And Arnav, still pitting his sister first! Wow! Kudos!

And thank you!

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Paramjit

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Posted: 13 years ago

#26

Wow that was amazing loved it felt sad for both Khushi and Arnav. I hope Khushi is fine and no harm comes on her. Hopefully all things will work out for Khushi and Arnav. Please update soon.

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monalisa1234

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Posted: 13 years ago

#27

Amazing to say the least. Please continue...pretty please

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kpk1002

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Posted: 13 years ago

#28

Beautifully written 👏 Shyam really did say what Arnav has already said before, didn't he 😕? I like the way you made Khushi realize it. Thanks for the PM😊