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TheFictionFreak

@TheFictionFreak

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Posted: 13 years ago

Excellent portrayal of khushi's emotions 👏
Pls continue..

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arshia

@ashvez

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Posted: 13 years ago

Hiru, this was good...u showed how Khushiis also feeling.Iam sick and tired of having Arnav feel only for his DI.And Thank you for making Payal strong enuf to let him out ...and Arnav has to know, how badly he had treated Khushi.

A great OS.

Ash.

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Leena

@LeenaRocks

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Posted: 13 years ago

Brilliant writing!!!

hope we get to see a similar track!!

loved the way payal was portrayed ... she defo needs to gain some spine and retorting to what happened with her sister.

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inspiringstars

@inspiringstars

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Posted: 13 years ago

LOL yes did not expect this...but still liked it...

In fact loved Payal in this one !

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srijaaa127

@srijaaa127

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Posted: 13 years ago

Wow too emotional... Loved it
Plzz continue

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PCdublin

@PCdublin

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Posted: 13 years ago

very well penned..the emotions are so vivid...i think we all tend to forgive ASR too easily (me included) probably because we all love him a little too! but u re right the words from both the men are echoes of each other...Please continue...

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Just_Love

@Just_Love

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Posted: 13 years ago

OMG! This is fabulous! Loved it, please PM me if you continue and please please continue!

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madforipk

@madforipk

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Posted: 13 years ago

it was lovely!! Yes, not the one I expected, I hope the family comes to know the 6 month contract!

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dumas

@dumas

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Posted: 13 years ago

heart breaking os emotional beautifully written poor khushi and now poor asr thanks for the pm

Edited by dumas - 13 years ago

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anodaksgfan

@anodaksgfan

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Posted: 13 years ago

Res

That was so beautifully written...

Great os!!!

Edited by anodaksgfan - 13 years ago

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