You, Me and our Lovely seasons

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Posted: 13 years ago
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You, Me and our Lovely seasons

Spring


Ashutosh

My heart has sprung into the bright sunlight
From the lack of love and the dark overcast
All the winter's snows and sins
seem to be a thing of the forgotten past.

'I love you' is the only magic I remember now
With the floral fragrance it brought along.

Nidhi

The loveliest song of the cuckoo,
The sweetest taste of the cherry,
The divine fragrance of the violet
are only the match to your presence in my life;

'I love you' is the only magic I remember now
With the majestic smile of yours that come along.


Summer



Ashutosh


Shall I compare you with the Summer?
Our initial exchange of words at the traiffic juncture..
So hot and terrible to handle
That was you with the rough winds blew me off the spindle..

'I love you' is the only magic I remember now
With the meteoric mercury rise it caused along

Nidhi

It was you I must compare with the Summer
On a day without steth I was a bummer
Rough winds did stir a new feeling in me
When all those buds in the garden bloomed with glee

'I love you' is the only magic I remember now
With all my barriers seem faded and gone.


Rainy




Ashutosh


You are the chill in the winter rain
You are the warmth in the summer shower
You are a surprise like that October drizzle
You left such an impact of you on me

'I love you' is the only magic I remember now
With the window you opened belonged to the past.


Nidhi


I dared to drench you
I shared a ginger tea with you
I never saw you like that before
I will admit this to my most ugliest foe.

'I love you' is the only magic I remember now
With those sincere confessions I made in a row


Winter



Ashutosh


When our hopes of togetherness
Puffed as bleak as mid winter,
You stood by me as hard as iron
in the negative frosty winds blew over,

'I love you' is the only magic I remember now
Which brought me directly from the hell to you - to heaven.

Nidhi

Dear, over the river of your bitter memories
To the place which bore, 'Ghar ashutosh aur Nidhi ka'
We find our own way to row past
Through the white and drifted snow

'I love you' is the only magic I remember now
With the loveliest journey ahead with you - to our heaven.

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shalini.malik72 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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@Mudra
no words to say just WoW...love is forever and your poetry says it all👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome! beautiful depiction of ashni love, very creative
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thank you arti, shalini, ssktlk😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wat a poetry...Lovelyyy..Mudra..You are creative genius...👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Mudra... hats off yaar... stupendous... 👏 u wavy deepe... never fail to b the sunshine in the forum. .even on the darkest of days ..🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: rabzonedge

wat a poetry...Lovelyyy..Mudra..You are creative genius...👏



Thank you.. but not much yaar seriuosly...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Armu4eva

Mudra... hats off yaar... stupendous... 👏 u wavy deepe... never fail to b the sunshine in the forum. .even on the darkest of days ..🤗



*mudra / Wavy / deepe are singing *



We are the little sun shine
We are the little sun shine
But without you O Sun!
There is no shine shone!!!!!

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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow!! aap writer to the hi ab kavi bhi ban gaye!!!

awesome poetry Mudra 👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: debaparna77

wow!! aap writer to the hi ab kavi bhi ban gaye!!!


awesome poetry Mudra 👏



mai shaayar toh nahiii...
magar mai wohi...
jab se dekha maine forum ko..mujh ko
shaayareee...aaagayeee...
(ting..ting..ting...ting..ting...)

😆 😆

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