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Posted: 13 years ago
#71
Great update👍🏼 VIRMAN shaadi😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
#72
.loved it as always.hatz off girl.keep up the good work.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#73
Enjoyed both the updates!..loved it
Thanks for the pm..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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just read all the parts
please cont soon
and please pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome update
very excited about the next update
continue soon and thanks for the pm!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I literally smiled at virats line at the end loved it please pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome...
virat pleading viren...as usual..viren to rescue...

good update...
thanx for pm...
waiting for the big day..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#78
Lovely update... Continue soon 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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HEY GUYS HERE IS ANOTHER UPDATE TO MY FAN FICTION..
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RECAP: Virat smiled. He was again lost in Manvi's thoughts. They were getting MARRIED!! Viren and Jeevika noticed him lost again in his dream world. Virn cleared his throat bring Virat into reality.

Viren: Wesse Jeevika tum kiski side rahogi shaadi m?

Jeevika:(thinking) Maine -- abhi tk socha -- nahi..

Virat: Bhabhi aapko meri baarat m toh dance karna he padega cahe fir aap pure function m uss bandariya ki side rehna..

Viren: Haan jeevika..

Jeevika:(smiling) thik h..

Virat: Promise?

Jeevika:(smiling) Promise
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Jeevika: Aacha ab m chalti hun manuu or baki sab mera wait kr rhe honge..

Viren and Virat nodded. Jeevika left the room. Viren turned to Virat.

Viren: Chal Virat tu bhi tayar hoja..

Virat:(giving viren a puzzled look) Kyu?

Viren:(Rolling his eyes) Tujhe nahi jana apni saagai ki shopping k liye..?

Virat's mouth opened to answer but he insted just nodded and went to get ready.

(IN THE LIVING ROOM)

Everyone was waiting for Jeevika to come. Manvi Beeji Pinky chachi Kadambri Chachi Vanhika and Jeevika were going for shopping. Jeevika came into view walking towards them faster then normal speed. She stood next to Manvi.

Vanshika: Chale..?

Everyone nodded. They all settled in the car and headed towards the mall. After a while Viren and Virat also left for their shopping. Not that shopping was their thing but Swamini had told Viren to go with Virat and get a beautiful wedding ring as well as a beautiful sherwani.

(IN VADHERA MANSION)

Both the boys as well as the ladies entered at the same time. The only difference was the girls had LOTS of bags where as the boys had only 3 bags.

Kadambri chachi: Haayni Virat tum apni shopping puri karke nahi aaye?

Virat: Nahi chachi maine toh apni shopping puri krli pr lagta h ap logo kuch zyaada he shooping ki h..

Kadambri chachi: Toh kya jo jo hume pasand aaya humne sab leliya... Shaadi h abhi shopping nahi krege toh kb karege..

Virat: hmm..

Vanshika: Aacha sab log fresh hojao.. M khana lagwati hun..

Jeevika: M apki madad krti hun..

Jeevika and Vanshika went to the kitchen and rest went to their rooms. They had a peaceful dinner. Dadaji,Swamini Bua,Vanshika went to heir rooms. Virat , Manvi , Viren , Jeevika , Inder chachu , Kadambri chachi and shlok sat in the living room to have some gossip.

Shlok: Chalo koi game khelte hain..

Manvi:(childishly) Haan haan..

Shlok: Lekin kya game khele?

Everyone looked at eachother thinking about what to play. They started giving ideas which didn't appealed shlok or Manvi.

Shlok: Idea!

Everyone: Kya?

Shlok: Dekhte hain aap ek dusre ko kitna jante ho..

Kadambri chachi: Oye shlok ye kessa game hai?

Shlok: Aare mummy m apse pap k baar m ek question puchunga or aap merko answer dena wesse he m papa se apke baare m ek question puchanga wo merko answer denge or dekhte h kiss jodi ko sabse zyada points milte hain..

Kadambri Chachi: Ooji thik h.. Toh fir M or yeh , Viren or Jeevika or Virat or Manvi..

Everyone nodded and started the game.

Shlok: Papa aap bato mummy ka favorite color?

Inder chachu:(thinking) Ummm..

Kadambri chachi: Itna time lagta h sochne m..

Inder Chachu: Bata rha hun.. ek min.. Green..

Everyone turned to look at Kadambri for the answer. She smiled.

Kadambri chachi: ooji Sahi..

Shlok: Mummy aap batao..

Kadambri: Black..

Inder nodded and gave Kadambri a thumbs up.

Shlok: Viren bhiya aap batao..

Viren: Jeevika ka favorite color h Blue..

Jeevika: (Looking down , softly) Haan..

Kadambri chachi: Kya baat h viren..

Shlok: Jeevika Bhabhi Aap Batao Viren bhiya ka Favorite color..

Jeevika:(still looking down , softly) Yellow..

Viren nodded and smiled. Jeevika lifted her head and both of them looked their eyes. They were brought back to reality by Shlok's voice.

Shlok: Virat Bhiya aap batao..

Virat:(looking at Manvi) Manvi ko White Color pasand h..

Manvi:(Childishly) Haan!!

Shlok: Manvi Bhabhi aap batao..

Everyone's eyes grew wide at Shlok's words. 3 days back Shlok used to call Manvi , Manvi didi and now he suddenly spoke Manvi Bhabhi. Manvi herself was in shock to those words. She had completely forgotten that she was getting married to Virat.

Manvi: (with full confidence)Virat ko Red pasand..

Virat gave a thumbs up and a smile to Manvi. The game continued with little nok johks and the 3 couples getting to know each other better. Finally at 12 am they stopped the game and went to their rooms. The next day passed in a blur for Virat and Manvi the other's were busy preparing for their Engagements and they were told to sit in their rooms and have some rest.

(ENGAGEMENT DAY)

Finally the day arrived for Virat and Manvi's engagement. They were getting ready in their rooms with their respective siblings helping them. the guests started arriving. Virat first came downstairs with Viren.. He was wearing a cream color sherwani with gold and rust embroidery near the collar with crushed gold stole with a maroon edging cream chuddhidar and cream moojaris. He was looking like a prince. Everyone congratulated him and asked him about is bride. Every girl in that room envied Manvi. They wanted to see who was the girl who stole Virat's heart?


Manvi soon came downstairs with Kadambri chachi , Pinky Chachi , Beeji , Vanshika and Jeevika. She was Wearing a pink color lehenga with Sequin sheeting throughout the Lehenga and crystal embroidery along the border. Accompanied by a shimmering veil with embroidered panel borders and crystal tassel edges. She had her hair in a neat soft side updo just like she had in Jeevika's Mehndi. She also wore diamond Jewellery. She had light pink makeup enchancing her beauty.

Virat's mouth hung open seeing Manvi. She looked BEAUTIFUL. Just like an angel from the sent from heaven just for him. Virat and Manvi sat next to each other and the ceremony started. First Virat took Manvi's left hand and slowly slipped the ring into her ring finger.

(RING: )


Then it was Manvi's turn. She took Virat's right hand into her hand very gracefully and slid the ring into his ring finger.

(RING: )

Everyone clapped after the exchange. The photographer did an amazing job capturing every moment in his camera. People started congratulating them. It was hard for both of them to belive that they were engaged. Two people who used to fight with each other were now so in love th they were getting married. On their first meet they hated each other and now here they were looking into each other's eyes seeing only love.. Both of them were having flash backs of what ever they went through together.

Virat how he thought he loved Maya and Manvi was just some other girl breaking through the walls he put up for everyone and landing straight into his heart.

Manvi how she thought she dosen't need a boy's love to complete her how she would never find love. Never experince this feeling. Then Virat came making her realize what really love was. What was missing in her life.

And the two felt like they perfectly fit into each other's heart. The two soon becoming one. Or rather the two had become one.

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THANKS FOR READING. LEAVE COMMENTS. SORRY IF I WAS NOT UP TO THE MARK. BUT I TRIED MY BEST. PMS WILL BE OUT SOON AND I'LL UPDATE SOON. KEEP READING.. 😊


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wonderful update 👏and thanx for the PM 😊

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