"Innocently in love" Kriyaansh Short story (done) - Page 2

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SECOND PART

NEXT DAY AT CREATIVE MALL

Two guys wer standing in front of Mc D checking out girls

v(vicky):how abt that gal??

r(rey): nice but meri types ki laghti nahi hai...kya yar ladki choose karne bhi nahi aata??

v:but...fine lets have a bet!

r: wat kind of bet??

v:u hav to make a gal fall in love with u...aur woh ladki mein chose karunga...if she falls for u within one month den u win my fav car volkswagan & if u fall for that gal den i will win your fav car range rover...okay??

r:(he starts laughing): yeh koi bet hai? I'm reyaansh "the hearth-throb" of gals...mein kisi bhi ladki ko yu pata lunga..

v:dat i dont know...agar nahi pati tho?? :P isiliye tho one month time diya hai!

r: okay dude whos the gal??

meanwhile
kriya enters the mall...
K: oh my gosh...so many stores...sharon u r great...but kaha se start karu??
after thinking for sometime she goes to jealous 21...be4 enter the store an awesome outfit display at the entrance window catches her eye and she stares at it...

vicky points to the girl in who was standing in front of jealous 21
rey starts walkn  towards dat girl

r: erm...excuse me...miss beautiful...
(rey thnks: woah...she actually beautiful...shes not like other gals...no make up on her face...she evn has natural straight hair...hm...)

and that miss beautiful turns out 2 be kriya!!

k: (looks left and right): me??

r: yes you...wud u like to grab one coffee with me?? (n gives a flirty smile)

k: do i knw u?? and did i mention ki mein anjaan logon se baat nahi karti...

r: no u dont know me...but am pretty sure ki tum mujhe jaana chaho gi...so...lets start up with a coffee??

k(starts walking of frm there): maybe in your dreams...

but rey dosent give up and starts following her cuz he didnt want to loose just because of a "no" .He knew dat its going to be hard as this gal is very different frm others...

kriya leaves the mall thru other gate and gets confused...and luks here and der
k: oh gosh i guess i hav lost my way...grt...
and suddenly her phone starts ringing...
k: hello mom...

s(smriti): hello beta...tum is waqt kaha ho??

k: mom woh actually mein mall mein hu...abhi nikal hi rahi thi bas...

s: bas...??

k: i lost my way...mujhe pata nahi chalra ki mein mall ke konse side mein hu...

s: kriya...tu toh nah...do u want me to pick u up...??

k:no mom u must be busy nah...aap tension maat lo...i will find my way back home...okay??

s: okay fine as you wish...and yea mein aaj raat ko thodi der se aaungi so...mein pura kaam katam karke hi aa paungi...so tum dineer keliye mera wait maat karna..

k:okay mom love u...byee!!

s:love u byee!

kriya cuts the call n as soon as she turns...she sees rey standing right behind her...

K: y the helll are you stakling me??

r: erm...chodo na...! i guess you r lost...shall i drop u home??

k: i told u i dont talk wid stangers...drop karna tho door ki baat hai...

r: okay...theek hai...akele chale jaana...yaha tho koi taxi bhi nahi milega...n tum toh kisi ko jaanti bhi nahi...
(kriya thinks dat hes right yaha taxi bohot muskil se milthi hai and mein kisi ko bhi nahi jaanti...actually I'm very lucky ke koi aake mujhe lift offer kar rahe hai..but...is still in confusion whether to trust him or not...)

K: um...erm...fine...um...theek  hai...

r(yes jackpot!!!! wohoo!!): okay fine tho chale ??

kriya nods and dey go to the parking lot...rey opens the car door for kriya and she smiles...and tells him the address..

as soon as they reach the main road...they get stuck in a heavy traffic jam...

kriya gets bored and switchs the radio...and her favourite song "our song " by taylor swift starts playing...

rey switchs off the radio...getting irritated...

k: arey...mein sum rahi thi nah (n swiths on the radio)

r: ha sun toh rahi thi but i hate country music and (swtiches off the radio)

k: tho maat suno nah...(an switchs on)

the both start fighting over the radio like small kids fighting over a chocolate

both forward their hands to the radio and their hands touch..

rey felt electric shocks...and kriya started havn butterflies in her stomach...and der eyes meet...(LLHH)

both wer so busy gazing  in each others eyes...dat they didnt even notice dat the vechiles in front of them had already moved and the vechiles behind them were horning since 5 minutes...rey realises and starts driving

r:well so hows it in L.A??

k:um...i dont knw...i think yaha guhmne keliye koi bhi pplc nahi hai...

r:wat?? r u kidding me?? seriously? u r in L.A...there are n no of places to explore...!!

k: rely?? b-
she was cut off by rey

r: mein thume kal  gumahne le jaunga...theek hai??

k: but mein toh tum hai janti bhi nahi hu??

r: come on yar...mein tum hai garh tak drop karr raha hu aur tum ho ki...plzzz ha kehe do na plsh plsh (and makes a puppie dog face)

k: but...

rey still makes dat face to whc kriya cudnt resist

k: fine...

r: oh thank god!

they finally reach at kriyas place when kriya gets out of the car

r: hey wait...i didnt catch your name??

k: Kriya Ghai (smiles)

r : me Rey...so Kriya kal miilthe hai...11:00 am okay??

k: okay sure...and thanks for the ride!

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so guys I'm ending the 2nd part here... hope u like it! and sorry for the mistakes! 😆

Edited by devilish11 - 11 years ago

hailaaa kitna bada wla flirt hai..:O

 

lol ladkiyan mere peeche aati hai..d famous RS dialogue..

 

but bechara kria ke pyaar mai pad jata hai..:P

 

kria lost in the mall and rey uski peeche bhaaging..

 

wat a bet..!

 

i hate dese type of guys jo sirf ek so called bet ke liya gals ke emotions se khelte hai..cheapsters..👎🏼

 

the update was awesum

 

luved kriyaansh ki nokh jokh upar radio..😆

 

luved it..

 

update soon..:)

 

thx fr d PM..

hahha that was nice part...rey is such a flirt and poor kria rey ke charm me phas gayi...awesome

rey kitna bada flirt hai... kriya unki chal mem phas gayi... thanks 4 the pm...next part jaldi se update kar...

AWOSMMEE dinka chikadinka chikka wlll hope rey falls for her and not cuz of this stupid bet obviously hamre rey ko resist karna is kinda hrd lol but nyc updtee yaar loved it well lets see wats gnna happen next rey taking her out nyc ideaaa soory cnt lyk and thnx for pm

Amazing update
loved it